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Before I begin, I must say that this is one of the worst books I have read in recent times. The FL is too weak even when everyone in the story claims her to be strong and changed. But…. This is crap story.

There’s too much delay in updates. As much as I’d like to continue vote this book but I feel that writer’s divided attention has stretched the story too much. The quality of the story an length of the chapters has plunged sharply. 100 days become 1000 days or so☹️ Author has neglected the story because of the new book. Pls take my top and finish what you had started before jumping on new stories/ angle or character

The title of the story intrigued me… but as I continue to on read… I feel like.. as Taylor swift’s Exile song goes…”I’ve read this story before, and I didn’t like how it went…” Before I proceed, I must share that I like author’s 100 days of seducing the devil… Now, coming back the review of this book, I have been waiting for the story to develop a little bit faster so that the revenge part begins. However what I see is too much of talking and thinking about the revenge rather than the actions itself… meanwhile the ML, who is almighty business tycoon, continues to be fooled by his female best friend-cum-secretary-turned-wife. I am sure ML doesn’t even know that his ex wife pregnant with his child when he had asked for a divorce. If the story continues the way it is going… it is going to be a boring and repetitive. For some 100 next chapters the ML will continue to be fooled by the current wife. He will eventually learn about her betrayal.. spending nights with other men while he is sunk in neck-deep betrayal of not giving his wife the physical support she craves. Soon they will also go invert to fertilisation.. which will again push the ML to support his biatch wife. On the other hand, the FL will continue to make any- like steps, hoping to make a major bang like impact on their relationship. Her son, who I feel already knows who is true mother is, will learn the reality and will continue to support her mother indirectly. Other side male leads will help the FL … Note to the writer: Trust me I hate typing so much. But please understand that People who are on this platform reads other novels as well. Hence they can predict the outcome/flow of the story. Please use a little bit more imagination and expedite the process … I know you can.

Why locked chapters are not available for non premium readers ?

I live Ethan, Nathan and Abi. Just love all three of them. Rest of the characters are so far good too. But I’ m really concerned how Phantom… will continue to live if Nathan’s feeling are for Abi’s physical body carrying phantom’s soul. Even the thought of this chaos kicks my anxiety.