BB_R_406

8mth

Posted

There are repetitive paragraphs continuously throughout this book and that fact you failed to catch that showed you did no actual editing of a finished product. Do better I would have enjoyed reading this if it was not for the repetition.

Genome Ascension: Rise of the Super Mech

Sci-fi · Crazy_cupcake

BB_R_406

9mth

Commented

books are supposed to have some mystery to them why would you put all of this information up before even starting the story. Put this in the book you're writing we'll read it there. we have no information about your characters or what any of this even means before starting to read your story bud. I chose not to even continue reading after seeing this as the start of it. Do better

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