Stillness_Of_Death - Profile

I want to start with saying that I've been a fan of your wyvern fic and want to know when you will continue it. It was one of the best Dxd fic for me. As for this fic, the start was good but it went downhill after the bael heir plot at least for me. The harem is too big and for me it didn't work out too many OCs and the harem members character were a bit off though the romance part was not bad but not good either. But the main thing that I didn't like was the power concept of MC. Despite having power of gravity from demon lord Wilbert from testement sister new devil which is equal or stronger than power of destruction it was nearly invisible throughout the fic apart from the start where he used it to train. Soul magic, necromancy , mage, knight alchemist blacksmith etc. you have put a lot of eggs in one basket and instead of harmony it all looks chaotic . Summary: For the author, you have a lot of ambitions you should have taken one step at time for all those professions and even that harem to work out not just take the shortcut called timeskip overall the concept of the fic was good but the execution was poor.

For some reason, this seems familiar. I think I've read it in fanfiction.net and that was dropped a long time ago. But I forgot the name of the author. Anyway I can basically state that Riser will lose the rating match and will have conflict with his parents and will exchange the mutation bishop piece for Clarissa from his mother. If this story is from fanfiction.net

It's good but I think it can be better if the story is a bit fast It's a little slow for my taste or the chapters could be a bit longer Whatever works

Writing: Not bad but needs improvement. Update: No comment. I mean every HP fanfics start with at a dozen chapters but very few maintain their momentum while the rest are dropped. Storyline: MC's too OP and no proper explanation for MC'S Powers. Character: Typical OP MCish behavior. Nothing that stands from other dropped fanfics. I mean nothing is perfect. Fanfics are like what we would have done if we're in HP kind of thing. As humans are not perfect the author should mix failures in success. I mean like how can a normal human can control magic and fight better than most adults at age of 5/10 year old albeit the human is a transmigration without hard work and years of experience even if he is creative is beyond my imagination. Long story short if you need to have a OP MC then write in the perspective of a normal human from Earth. Not everyone are genius you know. Background: No comment. Story is still young.

Nothing to comment about it. I mean, its a holy book in my opinion. It should not be touched....................... metaphorically. What my mean to say is that its the best Harry Potter fanfics I've ever read.

Well, its a great book. I know that tragic backstory is important for mc to become stronger but its still upsetting. But then again who am I to compain about good DC Fanfics after filtering my search. So, if anyone has some good recommendations then it will be helpfu.

Soooo, I think its a good book to read. For starters, translations and update schedule is great in my opinion. Hope author do so in the future too. And I guess background of MC is fine too but well I've been a fan of cross-overs so.......................................Im in a dilemma. But overall, its good book so far.(As of chapter 15).