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I've started re-reading your story. And I have to say it's missing something the first two chapters in Like an introductory chapter specifying what type of world this is what the heck is going on if there's any wars in the distance. Because Randomly just starting a story with 2 siblings in the desert. Just seems odd without explaining all these terms you're throwing at us
ch 0 2 The Taverns Tale
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I've started re-reading your story. And I have to say it's missing something the first two chapters in Like an introductory chapter specifying what type of world this is what the heck is going on if there's any wars in the distance. Because Randomly just starting a story with 2 siblings in the desert. Just seems odd without explaining all these terms you're throwing at us
ch 0 2 The Taverns Tale
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Fantasy · ThorinPheonix