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no, dont be sorry. you telling a story, and it's good. you know your doing it right when the person reading it can feel things. I absolutely love when words draw me in

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it was good. my cheek hurts now lol but the emotion was there. I'm a little creeped out by the whole dad part, but that's personal reasons. hit too close. very good. thank you for the chapter

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I personally think seeing it from a different person is great. it gave more info on what is going on "behind the scene" so yeah, thank you for the chapters.

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never thought of it that way. just standing there supporting someone and letting them know your there for them would be awesome. this is another great chapter. thank you !!

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yeah, I think if I would have been in a bigger school, I would have been more ok with myself. I mean, growing up where everyone knew everything, you got away with nothing and everyone went to church every time the doors where open, and the only way to get away was driving your beat up truck to the creek and listen to the frogs. you have a lot of time to think. and God was always there. well I take that back. people's word of God was always there. even though my small town loves my girlfriend and I, we still get looks and I get scared sometimes by new people, but we dont hold hands or kiss in front of them. sometimes it pisses me off, but then I have to try and put myself in their shoes and try to understand. ppl see how much we love each other. I may not kiss her around ppl, but I cant hide the love in my eyes when I look at her. she still takes my breath away and gives me butterflies. and if I lived in a bigger town, I may not have drove to a different state to find her. it's a toss up on prose and cons about putting that in the story. your amazing and it will turn out awesome anyway you do it. thanks for listening to an old woman rant lol

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thanks for the new chapter. you amaze me.

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and again, awesome chapter. I'm still at the edge of my seat 😁

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I'm kinda glad carmen is moving. I know Jay is a bit brainwashed, but, she doesnt deserve carmen. and that's saying a lot from me. but, I am so relatable with Jay, I dont think we deserve anyone

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this actually almost ruined my relationship. like I said before, I was raised in a Pentecostal family and I know where Jay is coming from. that's why it took me 30 years to come out. I didnt want to hurt anyone. I never came up with something like hyper fusion though lol but it's a good one lol but yeah, 5 years ago, I almost killed myself because I was so lost and my girl and I was not in the right place and my babies grew up and moved out. but religion was the biggest problem. it's what made me snap.

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wow......wow just....wow. I felt all that. do you know how amazing your writing is ? wow

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well, it volunteer, but I still go into burning houses and cut ppl out of cars. we just dont get paid. I live in a very small town of 400 people lol so we are not big enough for an actual fire department. but we do the same as they do. I'm getting a bit too old for it and will probably step down in the next year or two. yeah I started out drawing. I tried painting when I was a **** and didnt like it. my mom and dad both painted. but I tried it again in my 20s and it was of a bear and cougar, and fell in love. I dont paint as much as I want, but I do it as much as I can. you are a wonderful writer, and it's a beautiful art. I would love to be able to do that.

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yeah, I'm a firefighter. that's so cool about your dad. is it weird if I say I'm happy for him ? lol I paint mostly animals. everyone here loves wolves, and they are fun to paint, but I love painting the felines the most. you can see their muscles better. I love it when I can capture their mood in their eyes. and I've done several owls and different birds. I've even painted a few birds on feathers lol always thought that way funny. a friend wants me to paint sunflowers on a saw, I'm not big on painting flowers though, but im gonna give it my best shot. so happy for your dad. that's gotta feel good. I have 0 confidence in myself to have a studio. I just do it mostly for fun.

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you just had to do it..... you went and made me like Priscilla......DUDE. this was a breather, and perfect

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2 grass fires, and several first responder calls. luckily no covid calls. then read. but, I'm usually reading lol I should actually be painting, but some ppl have some seriously awesome stories for me to read lol so my paintings have been on hold. like my girlfriend says, I need a break from them anyway lol she is such a sweetheart

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............I think I literally heard my heart crack

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🤣🤣🤣🤣 oh wow, loved the pillow talk with the couch 🤣🤣🤣 loved it. a bit mad at Jay right now, but I dont know the story yet. my heart broke. had to take a 2 minute break to cuss

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well, Wally always seems to be at her locker all of a sudden. and then there's Priscilla glancing at her.....no, too obvious. and Wally could just be over excited about his new girl and wants to share with carmen. could be Jay honestly. her way of getting it out there and over with. sitting back, observing how ppl are going to react to carmen.......hum

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it's an amazing read. I can feel it, hear it and see it. I'm sucked in so bad that I'm up till 4am because I cant put it down lol as far as my mom..... yeah, it was ruff to say the least.....but we have to stop at some point in our lives to see their point of view as well. trying to figure out why the say and do what they do. my mom and I had an amazing talk and an amazing year before she died. she actually said she was proud of me lol it was.......magical. no, it didnt make up for all the years of mental abuse ( I was a bit of a workout junky, so she was too scared to hit me. not that I would have hit her) and it didnt put a bandaid on it either...but it helped me to slowly heal. I still to this day struggle, but I'm getting there 😁 and honestly, reading Jay's and carmen's journey is helping as well. even though they are fictional......its real to me ❤ so thank you so much

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