Typo, should be vacant not vagrant. Fantastic story, IDK why you say it starts slow in the beginning but then again I am a sucker for worldbuilding (pun intended)
'Now that I think about it, my soul feels like it had been vagrant all around inside my core. This feeling of not being attached really makes me feel uncomfortable, so I hope everything goes as planned. I intend to build the planet core to be compatible with what my soul was housed in before my breakthrough. But I will only know if it's a good idea after I finish it.'
Eastern · Suiyan
He just introduced himself. Why is he surprised?
ch 24 Raising The Price
General · Qiaoqiao
Gryffindor, not Granger
The pronouns are often mistaken through this story. I'm still not sure which gender An Yi actually is and the conversations are difficult to parse when the pronouns for the characters change from paragraph to paragraph
ch 25 Annulment Of Marriage By The Gu family
Fantasy · Two Hundred
embedded, not embezzled. very different
ch 30 Still Wanted More
Urban · Red Chillis
Looks interesting. I'm interested to see more of this plot, what will happen etc. Telepathy is an interesting storyline to follow but tricky to pull off.
The Petite Wife of An Eighties’ Villainous Big-Shot
Urban · Last Month Legend