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Adalwolf_k
LV 1Just a new author, doing it for fun, always looking for what I can improve on. We'll see where this journey takes me.
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Thanks, I haven't noticed.
ch 15 Chapter 14: Two years.
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I have been why a lot to do this week I will publish as soon as I can.
ch 13 Chapter 12: The Hunt.
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Thanks for the feedback, I see where you are coming from. I just did this with the purpose of setting up some things I had planned for how I want the story to develop in the future. And what I thought of why he turns them so easily is because what he wants is not only him and does around him being Lycans, but to revive the Lycan as the stories told in his old life. So in the future, he will turn other families than MC deemed worthy.
ch 0 4 Chapter 3: The Lycan family of the north.
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I saw it as they spend more time trying to not make a lot of noise and get caught, maybe I should have explained it a bit better.
ch 0 6 Chapter 5: Royal kidnapping
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I have not decided what the Starks will do exactly. And about the Dothraki, I already planned on something like that.
ch 11 Chapter 10: Leaving Westeros.
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That's what I am thinking of doing, but as I don't know have a lot of experience in writing I don't know how I will end up developing it.
ch 11 Chapter 10: Leaving Westeros.
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Yes, but he will before it all starts he will already have some more experience and strength.
Noticing that the fight wasn't in my favor, I had to turn to my true self. Tackled the guard closest to me to the ground and searched for my target. I run through the door of the room, breaking it. Looked at a frightened young Tommen, looking desperately at me.
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I don't plan on going in that direction, but thanks for the observation.
ch 0 6 Chapter 5: Royal kidnapping
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He is still young and has a lot to learn, it was an enclosed place and he could not use his true self to the full of its potential. And he will get stronger as gets older.
Noticing that the fight wasn't in my favor, I had to turn to my true self. Tackled the guard closest to me to the ground and searched for my target. I run through the door of the room, breaking it. Looked at a frightened young Tommen, looking desperately at me.
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I plan on making him grow stronger as the story progress, I don't want him to be invincible from the start.
Because by just letting your instinct go. It ends with you becoming a rogue wolf (Lycans that kills for the fun of it. That is to tangle up with the hunt that cannot think of anything else. It's so bad that it ends targeting other Lycans, as the difficulty of hunting increases and gives more pleasure).
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that the longer that Hodor stays in the pack, the stronger he will become. And also his loyalty, thanks to the link, is way higher.
And once again I was traveling, but this time was different. I felt happy with restarting the great race of the Lycans in this new life of mine. And in the company of my first beta.
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Also, I don't want the mc to be paranoid about everyone. he may have a horrible past life, but he is trying to live this life as free and unrestrained as he can.
I explained how the life of a Lycan family should be, and how to get the moon blessing. Also, told them what were our know weaknesses, and what powers we possessed. Finally, I explained that they could not turn other humans into Lycans, Because they did not possess the flame.
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I am thinking of changing it that way.
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I see the link as a way to know when they are not being loyal to him, as if they are not close to him or started to doubt him constantly, the link will weaken and he will notice.
"Thank you, my lord, but the starks have done a lot for me, even if you were able to cure me. I still own my life to them," Hodor said with a lot of hesitation.
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Well, I knew that, but it seemed a little too complicated to explain it like that, so I decided to just go with what I wrote. but thanks for the observation.
And I didn't forget to befriend the giant Hodor, my future beta, and like in the series he is a half-wit. I truly hoped the bite would heal it, I knew that what I was doing would change the story in ways I couldn't imagine, but I didn't care. At this stage, having a good time was more important to me.
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I just saw it as a better way to get closer to the starks before he returned. But I can see where you're coming from.
As Eddard stark was currently not in Winterfell. I would have to wait until the rebellion was stopped. To meet with him, the head of the house stark.
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How I planned it, was that he would stay at this height only growing a little more, and what would continue to grow would be his wolf form.
ch 0 3 Chapter 2: Road to Winterfell.
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In the past life, the Lycans were repressed for a long time, and their power couldn't compare with what he is developing in this new life. The height of 15 years was on his human form, and with only getting his true self, it still was not as developed as it should be.
ch 0 2 Chapter 1: A new life.
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I think so too, but I'm fairly new to writing, and at the moment of writing this part, and how he addressed him seemed correct. Writing conversations is not my strong point.
"Not at all my lord, I just want to offer you the chance to change your destiny. I know a lot of things, and one of them is that your family doesn't respect you, that you don't have a path in life to follow, and that you are falling into an abyss full of whores and alcohol. I know it's none of my business. But I cannot stand idly as such a talented young man is wasted in a castle that will never truly belong to him." I persuaded so that he knew I was just trying to recruit him.
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