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Woken_Daniel_Bipat
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I wanna be your editor so bad right now.
ch 70 Farewell Knight
Reincarnated As The Hero Ring
Fantasy · ExChaser
the only thing wrong I see in many chapters relating to the grammar is that the tense of some of the sentences and even some words are a not correctly used. I think if you can get that right, you'll be golden seeing that other than that, the story is awesome.[img=recommend]
ch 39 The Mission Continue
Reincarnated As The Hero Ring
Fantasy · ExChaser
this chapter feels like an opening to ghostbusters.
"Run! Run!" I tell the knight as I see that the ghost lunges forwards with the eyes that fill with terror.
Reincarnated As The Hero Ring
Fantasy · ExChaser
it means the same thing ya big doof!
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The King's Mandate: Anomalous System
Games · NoWoRRyMaN
its short for brother.
"Can I ask you something? What does bro mean?" The knight asks me that question. When I heard the question, I was surprised as he doesn't know what bro meant. I guess this world doesn't have that kind of word. "Can you answer my question?"
Reincarnated As The Hero Ring
Fantasy · ExChaser
ah, I see. he needed money for his education. these bank robbers really talk dumb. lol
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Reincarnated As The Hero Ring
Fantasy · ExChaser
Minecraft.
I punched the wall and...
The King's Mandate: Anomalous System
Games · NoWoRRyMaN
that scene from the amazing bulk.
Ben observed Beluga's Unique style. He still wore his signature purple pimp hat and sunglasses, but exchanged the robe for a purple jogging suit with white stripes. 'Is he Barney the dinosaur? Why does he only wear purple?' Ben wondered.
My Pick Up Artist System
Urban · SamsaraWithWords
prrrrrrr "PERRY THE HOLOGRAM!"
"A hologram?"
Nero, The Legendary Hunter
Fantasy · Lruska