This is pretty good so far. I think just a little editing is needed, and the characters are all very mysterious and interesting. Curious to know where this story goes in the future!
Fantasy · APrettyFeather
Good story so far! You really feel for the mc as a reader and just get thrown right in! Lots of grammar mistake, easy fix, look forward to reading more from the author!
Fantasy · Space_Kitten
Very hooked so far so far so good. Johnson character is very relatable and now he has a stranger to take care of who is frankly adorable. Good character interactions. More often updates will help with views. Thanks for your story!
LGBT+ · freneticmind
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This is pretty good so far. I think just a little editing is needed, and the characters are all very mysterious and interesting. Curious to know where this story goes in the future!
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Fantasy · APrettyFeather