Webnovel Author: Sailors_Den - Novel Collection

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Replied to DarkKnight32

Its all g.. I actually fixed that part to make it clearer to the readers giving information to how the AI was created... Yeah man I love reading or writing because it just relaxes me, away from things that bother me.. Its a way to relax and go into an adventure

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Sailors_Den

3yr

Replied to DarkKnight32

I see what you say makes sense, now.. It seems we got to break that rule a little because then the readers can understand the average IQ in that planet is 180IQ (which I know it will be 100)... Instead of saying that the average IQ is one 100 in that planet because they are all 180 IQ's.. It will be confusing if it was put that way

The normal standard of IQ in this planet was 180 and above, one can now easily imagine how much they have advanced within the universe.

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Fantasy · Sailors_Den

Sailors_Den

3yr

Replied to pikachu_boy

By the words of gods as it matches the level of the MC character then no.. But if you mean deities or Sovereigns who rule part's of the cosmos and other planes that I plan to add.. Then yes.

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Commented

I apologize but this book will be stopped for a few days because of life reasons... I will came back on it and start updating soon

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Fantasy · Sailors_Den

Sailors_Den

3yr

Replied to Marshmellody

I will fix that

I started to create does who are gifted by magic and does who do not have magic! Why? Because there was going to be two race's of two different genetics that had their own advantages. So what matches a genetic of magic? Intelligence because they can create advanced technology to match it.

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Sailors_Den

3yr

Replied to Daoist629680

You commented on my deleted chapter.. It was unfinished and I accidentally uploaded. If you read it, it had a much more light feeling to it. If you have any feedback of the beginning of that new chapter, then that would be great, after all it was unfinished.

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Fantasy · Sailors_Den

Sailors_Den

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For all does reading.. There will be various side characters.. One of them will be a villain that wants destruction domination... There will be various side characters who spice up the universe.. The god mc he is more like a watcher who makes things interesting, he is a MC but there will be others who are very important in the story.. The story will have anti heroes, heroes , as side characters who are crucial.. They will grow through the universe as the god of that universe makes things more interesting

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Fantasy · Sailors_Den

Sailors_Den

3yr

Replied to TheDolphin

Awesome... So make things a little more vague and show it with the action instead of wordings. Or else it will make it robotic.. I will fix that

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Replied to TheDolphin

I will try to make it simpler and more to the point... Thank you for the feedbacl

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Fantasy · Sailors_Den

Sailors_Den

3yr

Replied to TheDolphin

The main character won't change into a human mind set, he is like a reader a viewer of show as he unravels what happens. He is a neutral entity that watches the universe unfold. He won't be humanized. He will just experiment with the universe to understand it. Like a studying a disease. I know my biggest problem is clarity and grammar because I am second language, which doesn't let my imagination be as clear. Difficult to understand which parts, I will love if you told me what parts needs clearing up... Imagination points? That will be fixed. AI? That will be easily fixed because people already told me about that and I know how to fix that because I already though of it. Thank you for the real feedback, if you could tell me what needs clearing, then that will be big merit.

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Fantasy · Sailors_Den

Sailors_Den

3yr

Replied to TheNormalMan

The universe within us...

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Fantasy · Sailors_Den

Sailors_Den

3yr

Replied to Matthew_Tartas

Don't worry author is back because he had being sick.. I have being updated and fixing but now its time to move the plot. The next chapter came out, thanks for the review and reading.

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Fantasy · Sailors_Den

Sailors_Den

3yr

Replied to ICallOutIdiots

ICallOutIdiots do you call out iditots?

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3yr

Replied to DarkKnight32

Buddy all web-novels are like that, that make me special XD... I can see you are way to observant, to much of a thinker and question things a lot... If you bring a scientific brain into a fiction book then there's going to be a storm of questioning.. This books is to relax, to let loose that mind a little into a magical world

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Fantasy · Sailors_Den

Sailors_Den

3yr

Replied to DarkKnight32

I know ones IQ is 100 as average but in this planet the average IQ is 180 because they are "intelligent'' IQ are measured as something collective. The average IQ of the this intelligent species are 180 as average because most of them are born with 180 IQ making it average? You misinterpreted it or maybe i didn't clear it enough.

The normal standard of IQ in this planet was 180 and above, one can now easily imagine how much they have advanced within the universe.

I am the Universe

Fantasy · Sailors_Den

Sailors_Den

3yr

Replied to aSleepyPenguin

Yeah it's the recap... They will be deleted after the 5th chapter comes...

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Commented

I know the war was dragged however its needed because Marcus and united will play a large role into the universe. Expect quicker and faster chapters about the world, cultivation, reincarnation, magic system, main characters, and things that are planned but can't say because it will spoil. Adios.. Don't forget to vote

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Sailors_Den

3yr

Replied to Sailors_Den

This novel gives many perspectives by that I mean there will be various characters in the universe, where you can watch them grow and meet each other. There will be a dark villain character(perspective) that you will enjoy to read, he will be a big part of the novel.

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Fantasy · Sailors_Den

Sailors_Den

3yr

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This helps especially the 3 main pillars. I didn't imagine what hooked everyone to this simple novels where the fact that it fulfilled all our fantasies, i could now finally understand the psychological side of this. Anyhow I am writing a novel called.. I am the Universe at 8k right now published 3 days ago. An ambitious idea that has so much flexibility. As the universe god. Arranging everything to heaven-hell (Reincarnation). Treasures that attract wars and best of all. Magic and technology.

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Sailors_Den

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Good. It flows. It has a good idea. 5 stars? Yeah because it just has some thing that keeps me reading, I like the idea of living Armour. On the other hand I love seen books below the popular view count. As i am also an author who just published my book 3 days ago. In 7k views so far. If you curios its called. "I am the Universe". Anyways, its sounding good so far i will add this to my library... cheers

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