The book was alright, in the beginning it looked like the author didn't know what he was doing. As the story progressed, he seemed to get better at punctuation and the story seemed to flow a bit smoother. This could use a lot of work but the lore is fascinating. Story wise, it was fun to read, not enough detail to get absorbed into it sadly, the characters could have been fleshed out better, and the updates were erratic.
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The book was alright, in the beginning it looked like the author didn't know what he was doing. As the story progressed, he seemed to get better at punctuation and the story seemed to flow a bit smoother. This could use a lot of work but the lore is fascinating. Story wise, it was fun to read, not enough detail to get absorbed into it sadly, the characters could have been fleshed out better, and the updates were erratic.
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Fantasy · Mr_Eppeak