I like how much this story focuses on the impacts of their childhood promises and how it holds a significant impact lives. Imagine having that kind of promise with your childhood friend, then suddenly poof there it is, now he/she's the president. Now you have to fulfill your promise. The story's nature is kinda complicated and the situation of the characters could lead them to multiple conflicts in the story, which is good if you're planning to make a character's journey towards the ending long. I could say there are cheesy parts, but who doesn't love cheese anyway. While the main character seems way too doubtful and unsure of her feelings, it also establishes that she's trying to make careful decisions. These cheesy elements aren't for naught though, they play a big role when it comes to establishing the overall personality of the characters. So far I find the writing good, could be better, but still good.
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I like how much this story focuses on the impacts of their childhood promises and how it holds a significant impact lives. Imagine having that kind of promise with your childhood friend, then suddenly poof there it is, now he/she's the president. Now you have to fulfill your promise. The story's nature is kinda complicated and the situation of the characters could lead them to multiple conflicts in the story, which is good if you're planning to make a character's journey towards the ending long. I could say there are cheesy parts, but who doesn't love cheese anyway. While the main character seems way too doubtful and unsure of her feelings, it also establishes that she's trying to make careful decisions. These cheesy elements aren't for naught though, they play a big role when it comes to establishing the overall personality of the characters. So far I find the writing good, could be better, but still good.
I'm in Love with the President of the United States
Urban · maxyperson