Zeravar

Zeravar

1mth

Commented

I may be wrong, but I believe Wu Wudi means "Invincible"

ch 399 Wu Wudi

God Level Villain

Eastern · AbyssalDevourer

Zeravar

2mth

Commented

Chapters are out of order. pls fix

ch 362 Dragon Tiger Punch

God Level Villain

Eastern · AbyssalDevourer

Zeravar

6mth

Posted

This is basically a much worse version of Creating Artifact Spirits To Be My Wives. Author cuts to new scenes with no warning, has worse writing, and doesn't feel engaging at all

Blacksmiths Are Weak? My Artifact Spirit Wives Help Me Dominate the World

Games · I'm Not A Leek

Zeravar

9mth

Commented

"she's not even 21 yet!"it might be a typo but how old is she then?

ch 50 Regretting to the Core

Adorable Twins: My Mother Is a Cool Miracle Doctor!

History · Shengshi Tiange

Zeravar

9mth

Commented

Chapter is basically posted twice. pls fix

ch 109 Tables Turned

The Noble Lady Gives Birth to My Child in Secret

Urban · Tomorrows

Zeravar

10mth

Commented

Why not wear the set from the Sandworm King? We haven't seen anything from this Goblin King set, but he's wearing that instead?

ch 66 Gradually Ridiculous

As An Undead Wizard, I Summon SSS-level Undead Disaster

Eastern · Dior

Zeravar

11mth

Posted

The story is interesting, but seems like a knockoff of Black Internet Cafe. Wish the author focused on making actual games and not just transforming movies to games

I Developed The Zombie Apocalypse And Netizens Went Crazy With Excitement

Games · Rice Tour

Zeravar

1yr

Commented

Author seems to be losing track of names in this chapter

ch 73 The Last Bit Of Conscience

Villain: With God-tier Choices, I Suppressed The Protagonist

Urban · Final Fantasy

Zeravar

1yr

Commented

If they know there's a 3 day rejection period, why have anyone go to the school during that time?

ch 0 4 Training Officially Began!

Global Symbiotes: My Symbiote Is A Slime

Fantasy · Blue Soft Dough

Zeravar

1yr

Commented

Author make up your mind. Soul Formation or Divine Transformation, you must pick one or the story will continue losing cohesion

ch 360 That Guy Has Been Evil, He Deserved Death (2)

Divine Hint: Reporting An Escaped Convict From The Start

Urban · Bean Of Giant Silkworm

Zeravar

3yr

Posted

Grammar still needs some work, but is an amazing read otherwise! I do wish you luck with slogging through some of the more... grammatically challenged sections of the story