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i'll give it a look
another contrivance for a wish fulfillment harem lame and boring why so many people defend the "artistic" choice you made here as some sort of deep dive into a the darker side of humanity instead of as a contrived low-effort justification for harem wankery is beyond me you I understand, them not so much
As if a bucket of cold water was poured over Yugito. "I... I ha-... no idea..." She sputtered, her mind a complete mess while she tried to make herself appear small as her body uncontrollably shook. That was something she desperately tried to hide and not even her teammates knew about.
In Naruto: Reborn with Talent
Anime & Comics · KasiCair
the idiom is: to make or break
And then, much to Yozora's amusement, it all came crashing to the decision of the Senju clan. With the influence Tsunade's clan had in Konoha, her word could either make or end Minato's career. And Tsunade did exactly as was expected of her. She safeguarded Rei's interests and made sure to get a whole lot of concessions for herself by giving Minato her vote. In short, come the next war, she would not even be expected to help Konoha and they were utterly unable to make a missing-nin out of her. Considering the economical advantages in favor of the Biri-Biri company she asked for... Minato ended up wanting to rip his hair out after that particular meeting with 'old blond greedy hag'.
In Naruto: Reborn with Talent
Anime & Comics · KasiCair
That would be true if he hadn't already done that more than once already. However, even if he hadn't, it's a pointless edgelord monologue. This is one of the things better shown instead of told. It should be easily deduced by the reader from the actions of the character what their 'morals' are.
I'm evil in the sense that I'm apathetic to the plights of most people that I perceive to be 'evil'. Most humans in this world fall under that category. Almost all of them are extremely racist and have no senes of common decency for anyone they think is different. If the shoe was on the other foot and they were the ones who perceived to be different... They wouldn't last long, I can tell you that much.
The Witcher: Of Serpents and Blood
Video Games · RevenantSnake
if he's so passionate about physics to double dip on his master degree to such a retarded degree why would he ever start teaching highschool ethics? so stupid
"You do know that I have a double masters degree in physics and also gold medals… right?"
DC: A Spatial Manipulator
Movies · ToothlessS
the **** is a double masters he can have a bachelors degree, a masters or a Ph.d. in physics or a two masters, one in physics and another in something else
"You do know that I have a double masters degree in physics and also gold medals… right?"
DC: A Spatial Manipulator
Movies · ToothlessS
boring and unnecessary this is the fourth or fifth reference to his 'misanthropic' nature. you don't TELL us this you SHOW it to us.
I'm evil in the sense that I'm apathetic to the plights of most people that I perceive to be 'evil'. Most humans in this world fall under that category. Almost all of them are extremely racist and have no senes of common decency for anyone they think is different. If the shoe was on the other foot and they were the ones who perceived to be different... They wouldn't last long, I can tell you that much.
The Witcher: Of Serpents and Blood
Video Games · RevenantSnake
you have a thing about making redundant statements. lose that thing
Thomas has cancelled each and every meeting in his schedule because of Black Mask death at his hands.
In the DC World with a System
Anime & Comics · Darthnorther
pointless edgelord behaviour. less is more
What Thomas did with the souls of the people he killed some time ago is something which can give goosebumps to even the bravest souls in the world. He has made sure that they all know what Hell truly means.
In the DC World with a System
Anime & Comics · Darthnorther
traitors, the word you're looking for is traitors
"What? Genji, you know what will happen when others find out we helped Uzumaki to escape. They will think we are betrayers"
Hard to reincarnate into world of naruto as Iwa shinobi
Anime & Comics · dragon_guy
this is why people think anime is stupid. I AM GOING TO KILL YOUUUUU! *right after this exposition break* this is pants-on-head retarded
(A/N: he is explaining the jutsu in details to mc and Gari even though they didn't ask for it. typical conversation during anime fights)
Hard to reincarnate into world of naruto as Iwa shinobi
Anime & Comics · dragon_guy
"That is natural, I am originally a genius." Ryuu said proudly, simply not modest.
Hiatus:In Naruto with One piece System
Anime & Comics · Vencha
the word you're thinking of is Vanguard Avant gard is an art style
There were quite a few orcs. This, of course, was not a whole Horde, but only the avant-garde. But if they are already here, says that the first invasion I heard about in my previous life is about to begin. The attacking monsters looked at me with bloody eyes. Each of them possessed some kind of trophies. Whether it's fingers or ears, or just the scalps of the dead.
Alistar Bumblebee
Book&Literature · alchoz
Is it really necessary to repeat he's a genius again, and again? Saying it doesn't make it so, either have him do things that show he's a genius or don't. But repeating it over and over again is immersion-breaking and annoying,
"That is natural, I am originally a genius." Ryuu said proudly, simply not modest.
Hiatus:In Naruto with One piece System
Anime & Comics · Vencha
the context was obvious this paragraph is unnecessary
Well Kenshin was just joking so he didn't release his seal. And Kurenai also didn't hit him such that it will cause injury but still Kenshin now have panda eyes (🐼).
Naruto: The Strongest Kenjutsu User
Anime & Comics · SwordGod007
It is perfectly reasonable for your character to NOT interact with EVERY character in the Multiverse. You do know that right?
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Marvel This
TV · WolfSpatial
And I see you're listed as a fan of your own work. And what a might work it is. Two chapters, one is padding for word count, the other a mediocre setup. Aaaand the fic is already on hiatus. Seriously, the hard work can be seen from a mile away. Don't break that arm patting yourself on the back.
A Thin Man in DC (HIATUS)
Video Games · The_Great_Umi