takunithecat

The beginning reminded me a lot of Bungou Stray Dogs, but it gets really different. For one, the MC is much more powerful. Kind of. The writing has a few grammatical errors, but it isn't anything the average reader wouldn't be able to understand. Updates are consistent and the story is already flowing. The character design and abilities are interesting. There's already a !interesting! dynamic between the MC and his foil, so readers should be on the lookout for that. The world design so far looks fairly logical, but there is still more than enough room for the author to throw in twists. Its a great start!

Thanks! I'll try my best to!

Thanks! I will!

Thanks! I'll do my best!

Thanks! I've got some pretty cool stuff planned!

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Thanks! I'll try to keep it up!

Thanks! I'll try my best!

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Thanks!