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See this! I just gifted the story: Lollipop

ch 01 The Isekai Game

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I absolutely love this novel. It is well written and I love the video game aspect to it. It develops nicely and reads smoothly. I also enjoy the bits of humor throughout. Well done. [img=recommend]

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See this! I just gifted the story: Lollipop

ch 01 The Isekai Game

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I love this novel. I love the video game feel to it. It's put together well and develops nicely. I wish I could come up with stuff like this to write about. Great job. 😉

I'm happy he finally got his pieces in place and I can't belive that kid took the dogs to the beast keeper. He really should have let the owner of the pets handle that. I'm curious of who the voice is. 🤔

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Fantasy · MrLollip0p

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I can see how this system overdrive is going to be a pain. Random quests being given to him all the time without the choice to follow through. This is going to be interesting.

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Fantasy · MrLollip0p

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Danton was pretty sly. I never even thought about him getting the orb. Ha ha. I also can't believe Veronica is hone already. I feel it's too soon. Ready for more as always. Keep it coming. [img=update]

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Fantasy · MrLollip0p

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I already voted. I would love to send you come coffee though. wonderful job. always ready for the next chapter. sounds like Danton's rage is starting to show.

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Fantasy · MrLollip0p

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It is so crazy how conceited Danton is. He just knows that he is going to be picked. I totally rolled my eyes with that. A part of me thinks he needs to be knocked down a few notches. I can't wait to read more.

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Fantasy · MrLollip0p

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I feel so bad for Danton, being humiliated in front of all the students and then being shown up by Ben. I know he he will become great.

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Fantasy · MrLollip0p

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I really hope that the conflict between Ben and the Grail family don't cause a problem in the kids' progression in school. I also hope that Dantons arrogant attitude doesn't get them all in trouble. I can't wait to see what happens next. Well done. I would also like to say that I love how we can see the stats if all the characters and their progression as they learn new skills.

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Fantasy · MrLollip0p

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So, it seems that Veronica is actually wanting to help Danton because of her past with his father. I hope I'm not wrong here. I am super excited to continue this journey. I love it!!

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Fantasy · MrLollip0p

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I find it amusing the way Danton talks to the Librarian. He is so arrogant towards her. I have a feeling he is going to eventually find out something about her that will either help him or get in the way of his goal. Hmmmm.