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Good grammar thats readable and not confusing. Has updated regularly which is a plus. Tho not much development has occurred it is only the beginning of the story so that's a given. Love the mc.

Great novel.10/10.It is good and i enjoyed reading the story but the harry potter arc ticked me off a but. Don’t get me wrong I lived how inventive he was during the tasks of the goblet of fire. BUT the over usage of muggle tech just left a bad taste in my mouth. Apparently he read the whole Hogwarts, potter, black and Dumbledore's personal library. So he knows some really powerful, obscure and rare magic.

5 star for me! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem!

Who says dual cultivation is bad? Other novels made it look like a terrible cultivation technique but they were wrong. so far the story is well written and interesting. The MC is witty, charming and brutal all rolled into one.

the fanfic is very original and has shows the background of the mc very well. It is a new and very interesting. A mc that does what he has to be done, without being evil. Well done author.