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Thank you so much for this awesome review!
Quite impressive literature skills from the author, which honestly astonished me when they told me that they had only started writing since the New Year. Genuinely interested in how the story progresses with it's incredible use of metaphors and hidden symbolism.
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Popping* might wanna correct this one in particular
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Fantasy · Justin_Gabventure
Thank you very much :)
No problemo
This book has quite a good premise, with impressive execution of the story. The author paces it well enough so that it doesn't drag on, but nothing feels too rushed. If you're interested in fantasy/system novels, I would highly recommend giving this one a shot :)
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I mean, I've seen people reference the left side as the left hand, so I personally believe it fits lol
A screen popped up on the left hand of Archie's vision. It was a pastel blue colour with black text that made it easy to read.
Fantasy · ShadowAmeratsu
They will.
"Well, as you can probably tell, I am no ordinary skeleton. I have enough MP to destroy the entire first floor of the dungeon. Possibly. My MP stat says 'Boundless'."
Fantasy · ShadowAmeratsu
That is true, it's quite a bad thing to do. He's revealing information about himself. You'll see where revealing this information gets him later. One word of advice though. If you want to read a genuinely good story, read The System Of Silence. I'm writing it as of right now and it's turning out so much better than this novel.
"Well, as you can probably tell, I am no ordinary skeleton. I have enough MP to destroy the entire first floor of the dungeon. Possibly. My MP stat says 'Boundless'."
Fantasy · ShadowAmeratsu
I don't think I ever specified, but later on it's revealed that he's a second-year student in his school, which means that he's 14 years old :)
Archie woke up in his bed, gasping for air. Sunlight was breaching his curtains, alerting him that it was morning. He quickly threw off his bedsheets to look at his destroyed leg, but to his surprise, his leg was fine. Archie looked at his side, noticing that he wasn't bleeding anymore. Hell, it appeared to have never started bleeding in the first place. 'System, tell me everything you know about Night Terrors.' Archie commanded the system in his mind. A pale blue text box appeared in the centre of his vision.
Fantasy · ShadowAmeratsu
More is coming, don't worry :)
ch 15 Shadows In The Mirror
Fantasy · ShadowAmeratsu
The novel has an impressive plot, with huge room to have the characters roam, but the pilot chapter seemed to lack emotion. It had great detail and amazing descriptions, but when it came to providing emotions or human body language, it didn't seem the best. I hope that it improves as it goes along, but I'm optimistic of its future :)
The Tellus Mage
Fantasy · Junethephatcat