Not that good, reminded me of SAO, however i'm sure ur writing will improve. I found the story a little un interesting and please try to be a little more imaginative next time.
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Not that good, reminded me of SAO, however i'm sure ur writing will improve. I found the story a little un interesting and please try to be a little more imaginative next time.
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Fantasy · TheLeeRock