Writing looks looks great, tho needs for background info but im sure we'll be filled in on the next chapter. Very nice dynamic with nami and hal, I find their relationship adorable. Overall, good story!
Fantasy · JMotyras
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Writing looks looks great, tho needs for background info but im sure we'll be filled in on the next chapter. Very nice dynamic with nami and hal, I find their relationship adorable. Overall, good story!
The Trials of Mortality
Fantasy · JMotyras