Maybe try reading some other twd Fanfics? Reading those will bring you some ideas or maybe frustrate you because of the stupid decisions the mc's make lol. Anyways, enjoy your break. Hope to read something from you soon.
ch 32 Taking a break for a bit
TV · Sore_Eros
"I want to have a chiseled 8-pack, silver hair, perfect body, red eyes, and a 14 inches long & and 22.61 cm circumference"
Movies · Daraine_Murphy
Lots of potential
Carol could definitely get it but right now I want very interested in her, she was just too old and too damaged emotionally for me to put in any time or effort although I wouldn't reject her if she asked to get a taste.
TV · SERBMADHAUS
Definitely GILF material
Carol could definitely get it but right now I want very interested in her, she was just too old and too damaged emotionally for me to put in any time or effort although I wouldn't reject her if she asked to get a taste.
TV · SERBMADHAUS
Loving the story! Just make sure you're not creating a completely detached sociopath ;). He doesn't have to love them all just don't ruin their lives by making them his literal "dog" or smth.As for others with powers, if you decide to go this route make it so the Mc is not some lame weak man scheming in the shadows. Make him use his powers on himself to, for instance, improve his physicality, willpower, etc.Btw I would love to see some common sense overrides. For example making a girl think it's normal for him to be named as long as he has his socks on. Or that it's normal for a girl to help him out when he needs to pee and there's no toilet near them, they'll let him relieve himself in their backdoor.Anyways these are just some suggestions, make sure you're writing a story you yourself like. Can't wait for the next chapter.
ch 16 Spoilers maybe?
Fantasy · Author_1188
She looked at Axel, who still appeared tough with his eyes still open and posture defensive even though he was completely knocked out and felt extremely worried.
Book&Literature · Snollygoster
"Though the question is… how to do it?" The system didn't specify that.
Book&Literature · Snollygoster
I mean, if you know you're dead yet are still conscious, you know something's up.
This book has been deleted.
Later on it really becomes a numbers game, so amassing people is a must. But you don't want to recruit a potential Negan.A group of young men who are good hearted are a lot more valuable than you may think.
Airon made a big explanation, and everyone didn't speak after hearing that, but remained deep in their thoughts, without any emotion on their faces.
TV · SrCuervo
If she were to have slapped him, she'd be in big trouble. He's from a way more powerful noble family. So he did, in fact, save her from danger
4. Save her from danger once. (Done)
Fantasy · MarudameOssan
He means us, players. He played gwent in his past life as well and get addicted.
The Gwent match came as a surprise though. Roy thought he could make some money out of it, for the players in Witcher 3 would invariably get addicted to Gwent.
Others · MkoPoland
The story is going nowhere. The MC is an ugly bastard, with no redeeming qualities or intelligence to speak of. I've never understood this ugly bastard trope. The MC says he hates JP tropes and wants to be a CN MC, but he's clearly just trash.
Cultivating in this Wonderful World
Anime & Comics · TGThegood