Webnovel Author: Joseon_Walking - Novel Collection

Thank you for the such kind words. I hope you enjoy.

When you are publishing the chapters you can go to "stores" in Inkstone and edit the chapter. Just edit the title is all.

Thank you. I would say Weak to Strong is misnomer. I don't intend on giving MC a significant advantage over other methods of gaining strength, but he will find his own way to be strong. I hope people enjoy his growth and the surprise i have in store.

Your writing quality is great. Just seems a bit choppy in terms of flow from one chapter to another is all. Seem abrupt is all :) thank you for your lovely comment on my own story. Good luck.

I really enjoyed your style and writing it is straight forward. My main criticism is that some sensory stuff seems to be lacking in certain areas. Just occasionally note how something smells/feels/etc even if not necessary to the story or plot.

I got to chapter 3 (which is like update 10) you really should remove chapter numbers for letters and other things not directly tied to present storyline and label them differently it will greatly help keeping track. The Writing is top notch their isn't much to complain about and I like the style. I'm still getting a overall feel for the story, but by n large I can't complain much it is really good.

The writing is solid I saw few if any grammar errors the story flows well, but I would like a bit more sensory detail here and there (not much just a few spots I noticed seemed...empty? My biggest pet peeve is no spaces between paragraphs makes it really hard to read on webnovel, but that is a formatting issue not writing issue.

Really solid writing, but just a suggestion put a space between all your paragraphs it is really hard on the eyes to see them so close together it bleeds into one another and I get lost sometimes.

Everything is great and I really enjoyed it, but I think the script style for dialogue makes it a bit messy to read. I would rather FEEL the emotion coming from the characters as they are speaking and what they are emoting. Keep it up. You are doing well. I will add this to my collections.

Writing quality is really high, but one thing I would like more is more idea of what each person is thinking about the situation. Also the flow from one chapter to the next feels slightly off. Besides that really solid writing and story and people who are a fan of this genre can't find many complaints. I would say keep reading and writing it suits you.

It is important to keep the story interesting and consistent in premise. The Author has interesting premise and strong commitment to it. THe problem with System novels is the system aspect becomes just bloat and unneeded. Only to sell the power creep. Hopefully the author will keep that up.

Expect more chapters soon. I am releasing 2 to 3 a day until I catch up with where I am currently at with the story.

The author clearly thought out the world very well. Writing Quality: You can see enough errors in the writing quality that it could do with a few run it through here once or twice. Reread your chapter and it will be much easier to read. https://writer.com/grammar-checker/ I also recommend just sit on something occasionally and give us more detail as to what they are seeing/tasting/smelling/etc. Story: Going well it has cute premise so keep it up! Character Design: Solid, but have to wait to get more feel for them

Giving this a solid 4. For 3 reasons. 1. The actual story structure starts off strong and maintains that. I want to learn more about the characters and the world 2. Author seems to have solid idea where they are going with everything. 3. Had to take one star because when I read it their are enough grammatical errors and weird sentences that I get taken out for a moment.

My wife became very sick for awhile so I couldn't dedicate any time to updating. She recovered officially August 2023. Since then I've been working on the story updating it and moving towards rerelease. Thank you for your kind words.

Let me first preface this that I always give honest reviews even if people are looking for review swaps. WQ: This is where the story takes the biggest hit. Some of the grammar is a bit shaky. Nothing that will cause you to make it unreadable, but enough errors and minor issues that can take you out of the story. The Author seems dedicated to the story and has seemed to improve so this could get better with time. My biggest suggestion is pause. Updates for a day or two and just go back over your past chapters and fix the basic stuff. It reads more like a script for a tvshow which is interesting. I do hope for more description of the things around the characters a bit more. Otherwise. Good start. SOU: 5/5 nothing more to say SD: A little early, but solid. CD: Too early to have a strong impression of the characters, but solid start. WB: It is based more in reality so not much to say here.

Standard Author plug here. Thank you for taking the time to read my story. I have many in the works and many that have a lot of chapters built up, but I really wanted to focus on Legacy of Blood first. Note: The cover art went through TONS of iterations for me to get it to the place I was happy with.