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Sinful_Anarchy

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Just your average Jamaican who enjoys all sorts of genres. Feel Free to pop me some recommendations!

2020-11-16 Joined Jamaica

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I laughed until I cried🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

"They had such a severe bout of diarrhea and yet they came to our class to start a fight. The shit was beaten out of them, what kind of deep grudge did they have to hold?"

I'm a Pastor, what the hell is an Acute Gastroenteritis Outbreak Spell?!

I'm a Pastor, what the hell is an Acute Gastroenteritis Outbreak Spell?!

Games · Yiqian Qingdai

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So, I decided I'd read all the available chapters before review. In Summary, I had to jump, hop and skip over almost each and every paragraph and only catch one and two sentences I'm between to try to patch together the storyline because more than ¾ of each chapter is just pure mathematical formulas and scientific gibberish that I'm getting is from the intellectual part of Google because normal people just won't make sense of what the MC is talking about. Initially, I believed this type of writing would be temporary but it was really not. The potential of the story is buried under the mou ntains of x=n2 blah blah blah that goes on for 6-8 lengthy paragraphs. We really don't need to see all this because we really don't read the math explanations word for word and letter for letter.It was a bit disappointing when I realized that if all the mathematical explanations were removed ...this story would barely have 10 chapters if so much. The only chapters without equations are the sexual scenes and even those are short and rushed in comparison.The personality of the MC really rubs me the wrong way though. He's a cocky show off and uses every opportunity to brag about how smart he is. ZERO humility even when facing those more academically accomplished than him. He seems to believe he was born to have his nose above the clouds and then hypocritically calls someone with the same arrogance as him 'pretentious and cocky'. It's a pot calling the kettle black type of MC. The apparent FL is made out to be some form of always horny type. You don't really read much about her aside from the sexual scenes and then 'poof' she disappears until both are horny againWorld Building is zero so far. Don't know if it improves after another 50 chapters...doubt it. A whole lot more big and small complains but you get it.

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my thoughts exactly 😂😂😂

Yet, despite the picturesque beauty of this dream realm, a subtle undercurrent of anticipation lingered. It hinted at something beyond the surface, a mystery waiting to be unraveled. As I delved deeper into the recesses of this enigmatic world, I yearned to uncover the secrets concealed within the scene that had captivated my sleeping mind.

Erotic RPG: I am in the Game world, But My Heroines are Villainesses

Erotic RPG: I am in the Game world, But My Heroines are Villainesses

Fantasy · Darkness_Enjoyer

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I finished the whole thing, I really enjoyed it. It has some light n funny moments, alot of faceslapping. BUT personally...I don't know how I feel about the ending. For one, I personally hate when they use just one chapter for the huge time lapse and then a few lines to conclude a book that was over 1000+ chapters. The final chapter is just really lackluster and it showed that the author just really wanted to conclude the book after so many chapters. Like, what about his parents that he had promised to return home after a few years? 21 years later and after the huge time lapse did they die? they just were not mentioned at all. Neither were fraud Tian and the rest. Like WHAT?the were major side characters. Secondly, he ends up with all the girls, even though he really didn't have much of a romantic relationship with any of them. 1 of them he only met like 3 times, the other was around the same with 0 flirty interactions at all. He never even held their hand much less peck their cheek. Yet he married all of them and one even has his child who turned 18 in a few words.(time lapse) I have a few more complains that just stem solely from the final chapter alone. LACKLUSTER is the word. I wished I had just not read the final chapter and used my imagination to conclude the book. Honestly. About the system, He declined immortality just to stay with the females he had 0 romantic interactions and feelings toward. It's just really really dumb and so the system was muted. Sigh...the ending just leaves you feeling uncomfortable all over.

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So I felt the need to post a review cause I noticed most of the reviews were nonsensical. I think that if you haven't read a novel to a point you shouldn't post misleading reviews. Some claim to have read up to C200 but their review says otherwise so I'll review up to that point. Let's clear up some misleading reviews. 1. Some reviews claim that up to C200, "Mc cannot go a chapter without thinking with his dxxk". But actually, up to C200, Mc has only had sex once which was the very beginning. 2. Some dropped because Mc popped his cherry within the first few chapters claiming it was unnecessary- If you read up to C200, you'll realize why the author made it that way and he also mimicked the opening from the Anime with that female character. 3. The Mc IS a hypocrit, and he does admit to that several times, so no need to point it out in the reviews like it wasn't stated like he was all nice guy pretense. He isnt. The Mc embraces his flaws and he does grow to accept the system because just like anyone would, he got greedy for its rewards and the girls. 4. One thing that was true though- It's reaaalllyyy slow, not with the development and drama, but with the timeline. @C200, only about 1 week and some days has passed since 🤣🤣🤣ALOT happens within that short space so you don't really mind that he seems to do 1 dozen things within just a day🤣🤣but it IS really....shocking how slow the days go by I won't lie. 5. I DO agree with the reviews that bash the world building. The Mc only goes to the convenience store, school and 1 or 2 places nearby up to C200. Whether we'll see fix on that, I'll update this review later on 6. The Mc's assets are bountiful but it's obvious that the book is not(as yet) pushing the Mc to focus on business so ppl need to stop complaining about this point. The book focuses on him becoming a scumbag not him turning into an upright citizen who wants to develop this and that business. 7. This book isn't for those who have heavily invested in the animes mentioned in the book or else it will definitely throw you off. It's like knowing every character in Naruto and then having someone inject their own MC into the story who undermines Naruto character and magnify his flaws. Luckily for me, I haven't seen some of the mentioned Animes and for the ones I have seen, it's been so long that their personalities are really vague (e.g. Mashiro and Kanada) This book is more for relaxing and taking a break from realism.

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didn't it say she wasn't from earth?

I sighed internally hearing this. I knew my mother was saying this just in case one day I found myself alone due to being a demi human. A lot of books I read back on Earth talked about such things as discrimination against demi humans, and now that I am living in such a world, I guess it is true. Although Earth also had its fair share of discrimination as well. This was something I never understood and probably never will. All I know is that in a world where power is law, I just need to be stronger than others in order to not get bullied.

Reborn: I'm A Dragon Girl With An OP System

Reborn: I'm A Dragon Girl With An OP System

Fantasy · invayne

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dear author😭please get rid of this part. the cringe gave me goosebumbs

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My Neutral System

My Neutral System

Fantasy · Weluvfries

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