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Noice work man keep it up the but the grammar is not good enough you need to fix it and you need to ad some character development to skye she feels like a mobs in a anime

Second thanks man i found scp fic because of u

First of all r u gonna update ur fic?????

I love this so i will give u my power stone everyday o ~ up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up

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Wow, five minutes after i give you a rate and than you just reply it so quick

Hmm i think you lack of live in the dialogue i mean you should matching the dialogue with the character personalities like when he talk to spiderman, spiderman should be make a jokes like "wassap wood boy" or something like that (just my opinion) And sorry 4 my bad english

You know you should do something abosut his memories lol many people hate it but yeahh im okay with that, and u should do more dialogue (my opinion) and be careful when he have a dialogue with young justice member they're all is a youngster that still have a puberty so u should do the dialogue with more 'live' in it. You know what it means right? Teenager have a different personalities Beastbot with his noisy, raven with her ignorance, kid flash that alomost same with beast boy, just make sure do some research of dc character personalities before you write the dialogue. And least: im sorry for my bad english senpai

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1 year with no news on his condition or even an activity, well his dead fam hey if u still alive answer me are u still want to writing ur stories or not

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