Oppsie_Doopsie

Nice story nice pace good twist maybe a little bit slack in character design worl background is self explanatory because its marvel ... So yeah juat that

Nice story altough the grammar is well... Not good enough but still great work And theres another low review just because a grammar error and dont give a sh about other aspect just delete it

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I hope u say a truth

Cmon bro when will u update ur story?? Up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up

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Yea, we can clearly tell u that now naruto have a bit more darker personality.