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Nice story nice pace good twist maybe a little bit slack in character design worl background is self explanatory because its marvel ... So yeah juat that

Nice story altough the grammar is well... Not good enough but still great work And theres another low review just because a grammar error and dont give a sh about other aspect just delete it

Good ff keep it going Up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up

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I hope u say a truth

Cmon bro when will u update ur story?? Up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up

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Yea, we can clearly tell u that now naruto have a bit more darker personality.

Ughh it's good but just a few chapter. Someday i will be back probably until 30+ chapter but i will give u a few stones evereyday. Andd i will just fulling the 140 shit

The same author from fanfiction isn't it? I hope u not dropped this fanfic dude u know like 'imjusttrytofindmyway' don't make the same mistake like him, he lost the marvel feels in his fanfic wich is not 'yet' in ur fanfic so yeah i just want to say that bye

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But still it's still feel like u know, u need to put something to make the reader know the emotion of the character when reader read the dialogue well in the simple words the dialogue between chara in 1-15 really really unnatural that it seems they forced to talk when they angry or in bad mood. But its still good story

Well mostly in the beginning like 1-15 then u improved a bit

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I don't know i just passing by But dude u should put some extra work on dialogue like for real but yeah i will just give u 5 star because some people that gave u a low rate but no reason