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"Please don't overwhelm Rowena, mother. She just got here." Raphael intervened. "This is why your sons like traveling countless realms to avoid you."

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Lousy mother…rude

"She's just a close friend. One of the many gods and goddesses that Raphael spent his time with before you arrived in his life." the queen of Cretea said and sighed softly. "A good one that girl."

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Why is it not advancing?

ch 222 [Bonus chapter] You Are So Tempting

Marrying A Tyrant To Save The Kingdom

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Awful awful spelling and sentence stru cture

"I know. I know Etheria's fate lies in myd ha and every decisions. I am sorry about that. And even though it was hard for you, you still stuck your neck out at my queen's request to save me. The k you but at that no won't she I found out she was out... I lost it and went to battle."

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Ridiculous …. Use spell check

'Well only dor now i would addrews you as such. After now, no more.' He thought within himself, laughing at his supoosed victory.

Marrying A Tyrant To Save The Kingdom

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Awful spelling errors

The more he thought of others possessing Era the more his mind went bleak. She was his. He had not even you her but only kisses he'd, how then coukd the woman whom could make him swoon like this be with another man?

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Wow…. Spell check

Of course she cod not tell him about how she felt because she did jot know herself how she felt about Vidor just that though shebhatwd him, she worried for him and he was in jwe wvey thought.

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Spelling….

Once in, she shit the door and bowed to him before disappearing somewhere else to give them privacy.

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So many spelling errors…..

At noon that day all the needed preparations to be made for Eleora's departure had been prepared and even the orphans had been foldnin advance that Era was visiting them with a new member of their family.