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still doesnt make sense to me to be so out of order and back tracking.

seems the chapters are out of order. makes no sense. the twins were babies,then kids then adults and now toddlers again...? seems the story could of ended already

kinda confused about the last few chapters and the order of the story..

I'm kind of confused with the order of the chapters. it went from him and chirp then back to regular life and now back to chirp. I guess I'm just kind of confused why it went in that order.

I dont like katelinas character at all, but the fact I strongly dislike her means you did a good job writing. i appreciate the time and energy writing this story must have taken. i enjoy reading it. having characters we hate means the creator did a great job and put in work to develop such a defined character and personality.

katalina is ridiculous. she is demanding and controlling and expects EVERYTHING to be her way. I love the story as a whole but I cant stand her. at all.

katailina or whatever her name is so annoying .I like the story as a whole and all the other characters but she is awful