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Moments 176
Author, I believe you when you say that we will be enthralled in later chapters, but this child should have been introduced way before now. What happened between she and Anthony should have been explained before this section. What dark at? From what's been written, she's not accomplished what her peers have accomplished due to financial problems and taking care of her aged parents. I'm sorry but it doesn't make sense unless you address it at the beginning and then proceed with the story.
She looked at her watch. It's time to pick up her five-year-old boy at school. So, she decided to pick him up first and bring him along to meet Anthon. Anyway, he could not care less about the child, and there was no way he would find out.
I Just Can't Say Goodbye
Urban · gents46
Author, is it okay to point out sentences, words that are not right? I don't want to offend you but your sentence structure isn't that great and certain words used are wrong. Please let me know if it's ok.
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I Just Can't Say Goodbye
Urban · gents46
I'm glad she placed her parent's needs above her own desires! A love affair doesn't necessarily mean being in love.
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I Just Can't Say Goodbye
Urban · gents46
I did the same thing because the book was so engrossing, I couldn't put it down! This was when I was a child as well as an adult. However, now I'm so impatient that I'll skip ahead just to see what has happened!
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I Just Can't Say Goodbye
Urban · gents46
uncontoversially
ch 29 You Reap What You Sow
Master's Untamed Wife
Urban · XiaoMeeHee
What? Didn't she say they were always looking at her? She is used to the attention!
On our way to my class, some students give us weird looks. Probably thinking 'what did he look at her' I just bent my head down because I do not use with this attention. And at that time he slung his arms in my shoulder making their eyes widen. I hold myself to not roll my eyes Geez... Their just dramatic is not like me and Dean is kissing.
The Model Was a Nerd
Teen · pinktulips
Really? The good person she is? Don't you mean the weak and pathetic person she is!
I sighed. I don't have any other choice he helped me earlier and being the good person I am I accept him to be my friend. I mean there's a first time for everything right.
The Model Was a Nerd
Teen · pinktulips
Author, why is she also so dense? I'm sorry Author, but unless this weak, dense stupid girl gets some assertiveness about her, I'm out. I hate reading about weak people who don't even attempt to defend themselves. Besides, she's been bullied for three years and has never, not once stood up for herself! So what if she becomes a famous model later, give her a backbone now, please!
"So you mean you want to befriend me?" I raised my eyebrow.
The Model Was a Nerd
Teen · pinktulips
Praytell Author, can't you give this girl a freaking spine!
Second, how unfortunate for me to be in the same class as her. She means that is Jessica's best friend or should I say her second in command. When I walked into this class she and her other friend glared at me but I looked down quickly and make my way to my seat. Even after the class started she kept glaring at me hard.
The Model Was a Nerd
Teen · pinktulips
Whoa, this is the first time! I've ever seen that people say grace! Seriously, in the movies and books, not once was it ever mentioned. This is a first!
My dad came in and we start our grace then the maids serve our food. Today's menu is chicken rice with curry sauce and we start eating and my dad suddenly asked me.
The Model Was a Nerd
Teen · pinktulips
Snat, I've recommended your story to others. I told them how sassy and sweet you are ☺️.
After Xiao Yu hung up, he began to frown as he taps the corner of his phone to his palm, murmuring, "Should not have listened to Xiao Yu. How could I force Xia Sha to be with me this way."
100 years before Divorce
Urban · Snat
Author, why is this woman so meek? no spine? Why does she accept the way he treats her? why is there no background on either of them? Maybe if you had given us some information about their relationship we should be able to understand their actions.
However, he was so close to her that she could feel the heat of the warm breaths on her neck. Her heart was throbbing, and she was panicking, not sure of what to do.
Back Then, I Adored You
Urban · Ye Fei Ye
Yes, damage is really permanent!
After Xiao Yu hung up, he began to frown as he taps the corner of his phone to his palm, murmuring, "Should not have listened to Xiao Yu. How could I force Xia Sha to be with me this way."
100 years before Divorce
Urban · Snat
You were going to give 100 coins away to some reader.
ch 37 Value Of Words
Master's Untamed Wife
Urban · XiaoMeeHee
You were going to give 100 coins away to some reader.
ch 37 Value Of Words
Master's Untamed Wife
Urban · XiaoMeeHee
What's going on?! Why is she dead and in a jungle area?
The police inspector, Abdul Kaiser, came near it and searched for any evidence that would suggest her identity. He found a wallet in the pocket of her skirt that had her I-card along with some money. The body belonged to one Stella Mendes.
The Inconvenient Wife
General · MishaK
Author, aren't you shameless! How could a child know his father? This is so fast and unreal that I want to start over!
I Just Can't Say Goodbye
Urban · gents46