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I have read 30 chapters. I really wanted to love this work, but I just couldn't... Usually when I write bad reviews, I devote most of them to logical holes and other irrationalities of the author... but in the case of this work, there are other problems (some of them are very subjective and may even be a plus for someone). 1) Unhealthy relationships. It feels like absolutely any relationship in the work has a different degree of unhealthiness (whether it's parents and children, lovers or a master-servant)... Well, partly this can be said about real life, but still, here it is brought to the extreme. 2) Abuse and torture stuff. I have nothing against that when the story requires it, but it seemed that the author just wondered if they could write it, and went on a writing spree and gave out several dark chapters in a row. When such heavy topics are thrown in huge quantities without any purpose, it just becomes boring and tasteless! 3) Creative magic. Well... the author tried. But didn't succeed. Well, perhaps in future chapters the author will make that mess recognizeble, but right now it feels like a lot of random cool concepts without any clay between. 4) Well, the author mentions this quite early, but there will be a rapidly developing romance with SM inclinations and much more unhealthy moments. Keep in mind. 5) The overall pace. The work is very inconsistent and the author feels the lack of writing style. We jump all the time from chapters full of inner monologues to full action. One second we get the thoughts of one character, the next line we switch our attention to the second. Slice of life abruptly turns to magic expositions, and than to romance. And so in everything. Sometimes I just get lost. I want to pay attention to one topic, but the author has already moved on to something else. In general, I can consider this novell as a bad copy of typical Korean romantic novels. P.S. A particularly subjective point, but in one chapter where the heroine talked about how her magic would be working with tattoos, there was the phrase "it was fair for her to worry that her partner might not like her future aesthetic." And although her partner obviously didn't mind, the same can't be said for me... And as for her partner herself, she's tall , toned, with abs and muscles... It is seriously annoying that every second author uses such type in yuri novels.

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To be honest, although I appreciate the passion of the author (daily updates) and free chapters, I unfortunately have to drop. 1 The whole world feels very "naive" and straightforward. One dimencional. There are bad guys, there are good guys. Everything works directly and openly, no tricks and other things. Such a world seems rather ridiculous. 2 I don't feel the chemistry between the heroines. And I can't believe the depth of their feelings. They had a high school romance for a year before reincarnation, but this does not at all explain their obsession with each other during the 15 years of their new life... moreover, the obsession is quite superficial. Although Kaede vows to find her lover in the new world, she does absolutely nothing to do so. (And considering the guild's very convenient message system, one could at least try) 3 The author is trying to make a work from the perspective of 2 heroines. And unfortunately, I can't call it a success. On the one hand, we have the vampire Kaede, who got interesting action scenes, a "hard past" and absolutely OP. But in contrast to this, she is an absolute idiot (it would seem that living under the eternal fear of death should teach you something??? But no. She's just suicidal. The problem is not finding her. She finds them). She also developed the complex of a typical issekai hero - saving slaves and killing slavers... And the worst part is that she was followed by absolutely uninteresting characters (these same former slaves). On the other hand, we have the aristocrat Yui - she passes through a typical academic arc. She is also strong, but in a more realistic sense (not at the level I killed a god at the age of 5, but - I train hard and am the strongest among my peers). She has a friend with whom the reader builds a strong emotional connection. Her various acquaintances are also interesting in general. But any action scenes with her are of course very bad, because it makes little sense to watch her kill goblins when the first heroine hunts a dragon. Well, in general, there are practically no interesting events in her life. It would be a perfect Slice of Life, but alas. To be honest, I would be more interested in a different story.: - Just a Yui story. Add more plot and depth to it, give her Luna as a partner, and it won't be very unique, but a decent story. - Either the same thing, a pair of Yui +Luna against a crazy Kaede. It will be quite dramatic, but also interesting.

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So... no final chapter?

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