Actually, he didn't know how he got there, so maybe he got sniped without knowing.
"I got isekai'd?! Did truck-kun learn to snipe?!" I screamed as I crouched, holding my head.
Fantasy 路 Lievel_Veltrandt
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Urban 路 Yuri_yuri
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Urban 路 Yuri_yuri
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Urban 路 Yuri_yuri
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Urban 路 Yuri_yuri
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Urban 路 Yuri_yuri
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Urban 路 Yuri_yuri
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Urban 路 Yuri_yuri
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Urban 路 Yuri_yuri
Well...the confusing start, and the script-like writing style is making the story even more confusing. Imagination can make do about the extremely brief descriptions, but the details are completely unknown making it hard for readers to immerse themself in the book. If you need guides about making novels, try reading 'The Book of Authors' its free and it will definitely help you improve The premise of the story isn't bad, but there is still a lot to learn since its only at the very beginning. I'm looking forward to see if you get improvements馃憤馃憤
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Hmmm...interesting. I've never read script written books before so somehow, it really got its own merits. Well, the story is lacking in descriptions. The details you give makes the difference between a play script and a novel. Also, it somehow feels...robotic? maybe its because I'm not used to reading scripts. Well, the only biggest flaw in this is the lack of details so you might wanna think about abandoning the script-like writing style.
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Yep. Thi is quite similar in many concepts to my novel, but it most resembles TDG. It's quite well made too. 馃憤馃憤馃憤馃憤
ch 0 2 Cultivation at the Dark Energy Lake
Fantasy 路 Happy_soul
Ah...those days...
'Yeah. I remember God Eater when it wasn't released in the west yet. I had to work hard finding where to craft weapons.'
The Legend of Astra
Fantasy 路 Lievel_Veltrandt