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SolomonCliff

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I am a man of many tastes

2020-11-17 Joined Global

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I just had to have it, it looked exactly like Vergil's Yamato.

Asher the Insane

Asher the Insane

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Read a bit further, it's gonna be explained

Theoretically, the next buff I would get should be about 36500 times stronger, right?

Asher the Insane

Asher the Insane

Fantasy · SolomonCliff

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It should be "blown", not "blow" Just a grammatical error on my part

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Book of Kings

Book of Kings

Fantasy · SolomonCliff

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Sarcasm. The description of it just sounds funny to me.

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Professional yet attractive tone? I'd love to hear however that would sound like

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I'll just straight up skip the critique on grammar, as we all know most of the time it doesn’t live up to expectations. But for the rest, meh. It's isekai but a twist, how unexpected, right? Though the biggest appeal is the edginess of the story. I'll not spoil it here but just know that if you like a lot of EDGE you'll fit in here nicely. At least read until Chapter 4, and then you'll get your reward.

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Welcome to Edge City, baby!

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[Review after reading 11 chapters] This actually isn't too bad in its own genre. The premise itself is a bit generic, but the way it's got to it is something I thought was unique. The grammar is weird sometimes, sentence structure could be better and the strangest thing I noticed was that the storytelling voice, the narration, sometimes dips into the extreme casual. And it sometimes treats the reader as if he were stupid and also, the story is full of exposition, just telling us 'This is how it is' instead of trying to use another method of convey this information. Story-wise I have only a few complaints, which have may have been resolved in the next twenty other chapters I haven't read. !SPOILERS! This is, to me, the weirdest thing. This is the third and last attempt that Rishi, the MC, has to pass the exam to get a Book of Contracts. He's hurt and instead of trying to get healthy before attempting the exam, he just rushes in. Why? Rishi himself was surprised when he found out that he was healed when he was teleported into the exam arena. So, I assumed that he didn't know, or wasn't sure that he would be. Why is he rushing so hard to get it done, even while hurt? And secondly, there doesn't seem to be a downside to the two types of contracts one can have with a beast when choosing the servant variety. You could be normal friends with your beast, just as with the partner one, but still have the servant one chosen, so that it cannot leave or disobey you.

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