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Oh in that case I've already responded haha. I'll be deleting the reply with my username now that you've seen it, don't want everybody to have access to that.

It's very hard to put how I feel about this story into sensible words, but the narration and plot of this book feels like I'm having a conversation with the story rather than being a third party witnessing the events unfold if that makes sense, and to me it kills the whimsy of storytelling and makes it into a novel I can't find myself immersing into. Not a fan of that writing style.

Could do with faster pacing and there's hardly a reason to make the MC Zoro when his personality couldn't be anymore different from his canon counterpart. Other than that the story is fantastic, it hits all the emotional beats perfectly and is very immersive. 4.4 Stars.

Paced well and the themes are great, if a bit out of the author's hands at times. In the words of one of the worlds characters, the MC is very peculiar, yet somehow enchanting; this of course makes for a very unique and refreshing read. Also, the main cast are very well interpreted in this story making it truly feel like this fanfiction belongs in that universe instead of being immersion breaking. 4.8 Stars. Highly recommend.

author is weird plotpoints are weird dropped on chapter two because the mc says hes going to kill his parents when he grows up, which is already crazy, then it segues into a scene where the mother starts jilling herself to baby!MC suckling her teat there are also grammatical errors but those are second in the list of complaints batshit insane, writing quality and character design are a flat 1*