ANIME_LIFE

13d

Replied to Noble_K1ng

yes totally agree with that

"Be a little more specific child, which one of yours? The "old one"? Or the "one in this world"?", Rinia answered back with questions of her own.

TBATE: The Emissary

Anime & Comics · DaoistvZHdIQ

ANIME_LIFE

15d

Posted

I found the protagonist's acknowledgment of their limitations to be refreshing and realistic, adding depth to their character. However, I was hoping for more assertiveness and backbone from them, as their obedience to every order felt somewhat one-dimensional. Despite this, the narrative holds promise, especially with the potential consequences the clan faces when boundaries are pushed too far. With a bit more character development and exploration of the consequences within the clan, this story has the potential to be truly gripping and immersive.

Naruto: Desperate Survival

Anime & Comics · HiddenInPlainSight

ANIME_LIFE

27d

Replied to Neo_Night

+1

Few of you said the story is going exactly like the novel so I was thinking of ways to change it and i couldn't get a nice idea . But now I do and I am going to make some changes.

Second Youngest Son (Swordmaster’s Youngest Son Fanfiction)

Anime & Comics · Mr_Moringstar

ANIME_LIFE

1mth

Commented

I just finished the latest chapter, and I have to admit, I'm feeling pretty torn up about the main character losing their sight. It hit me hard and made it difficult to stay as invested in the fanfic. While I understand that the story isn't following the typical path of an overpowered protagonist, it's still tough to see them face such a challenging setback. Despite this, I'm holding onto hope that they'll find a way to regain their sight. Thank you for the chapter; I'm eagerly anticipating what's to come, but also feeling a mix of emotions right now.

ch 37 A talk about souls

Souls in Teyvat

Video Games · ARandomMob

ANIME_LIFE

1mth

Commented

I like how the story is going but i Just hate how weak Ed is shown I don't think ed Should be this weak

ch 19 Chapter Nineteen- Ambush In The Sand

Naruto: A Life On The Battlefield

Anime & Comics · CYANOMN1VORE

ANIME_LIFE

2mth

Commented

good luck for the test

ch 26 Notice

Jujutsu Kaisen: The Traveller

Anime & Comics · Evrabonzz

ANIME_LIFE

2mth

Posted

great story has good potential I don't know how it's going to be waiting for future chapters .

The Villainess Whom I Had Served For 13 Years Has Fallen

Anime & Comics · StorieExporter

ANIME_LIFE

2mth

Posted

I think this story and character have potential just need to make changes you need to properly outline the story from the story start .There is creativity i believe you can make this a great story but for now the story needs some work .

Uzumaki's commandments

Anime & Comics · nexusstar21

ANIME_LIFE

3mth

Commented

I also believe the mc can be guardian of humanity as he is resistant to all supernatural power such as curse,mind control and seal .Mc is equivalent of nuclear bomb but capable of destroying universe so supernatural people will have listen to the mc even if they don't want to .mc can be the leader of humanity even if he doesn't have the power to dominate

ch 11 Author note

DxD: The Illusion Killer

Anime & Comics · BlackMountainKing

ANIME_LIFE

3mth

Commented

as long as imagine breaker touches the object it will revert to normal or break

2.) Imagine Breaker vs Sacred Gears? Imagine Breaker vs Longinus series sacred gears?

DxD: The Illusion Killer

Anime & Comics · BlackMountainKing

ANIME_LIFE

3mth

Commented

great chapter can't wait for the next chapter.The character and story development is going awesome.

ch 12 Chapter 12

Journey Of Zoro In Another World

Anime & Comics · Fumiaki

ANIME_LIFE

3mth

Commented

bro marry her she sounds like a keeper dont't let her leave.Dont feel so down about yourself.I don't about field of study but if you are interested in IT field want to make some career in Web and Android Development I can help you out if you are willing to spend 8 months it can lower depends upon grasping power with me and consistently.I Can get you job ready for front and backend dev with minimum 5-10 lpa

ch 63 -Notice-

Dark Hero in Tate no Yuusha

Anime & Comics · Thot_Slaughterer

ANIME_LIFE

3mth

Commented

yeah NP take care of yourself

ch 17 Recovery

Douluo Dalu: Four Timelines, One Soul

Anime & Comics · Nero_schizoid

ANIME_LIFE

3mth

Commented

love this fic can't wait for the future chapter

For everyone screaming because I didn't come up with something, well what did you expect? This is a fanfiction, not a bestselling novel. I am not a professional. No matter what I would write, it wouldn't do One Piece justice.

The Honoured One

Anime & Comics · Daoistz1VV3s

ANIME_LIFE

4mth

Posted

great read waiting for more chapters I see the potential some novel start out good but make the boring ending

Douluo: The Blind One

Anime & Comics · Trinity189

ANIME_LIFE

5mth

Replied to Yeye_Qiu

thanks 👍

Naruto : Gojo Satoru Reborn As Kakashi's Brother

Anime & Comics · Yeye_Qiu

ANIME_LIFE

5mth

Posted

I like how you are showing the devil in dxd that they are more than human and not human.But I don't like the cheats you have given to OC(rias) she has the essence of evolution which means she will never lose any fight and grow stronger with every fight and become the strongest being there is no suspense left for me.Try to do something this issue