I honestly didn't expect much, but i got to say, 7 chapters in and this has turned into one of my favorite fanfics.
ch 0 7 Chapter 6: Harry's first happy moments
Book&Literature · Snollygoster
honestly these chapters where the parents just talk are really boring. I know its for to introduce new characters. But i feel like its doesn't need to take so many chapters
ch 27 Episode 27 The Royal Palace ‘The Mother of Xenperia 2’
History · Fullbios
lol, love that the parents have a bet with each other on what will be their children's first words. its a small detail, but it really makes the characters seem more real
ch 23 Episode 23 - The Royal Palace 2 'Her first word'
History · Fullbios
it should be imprint not impregnating
Frank instinctively selected the 'Yes' option immediately after the System message popped up in front of his sight, as the book itself quickly began to fragment into bright, white, and yellow particles of light, impregnating his entire body as his very mind was given a stream of knowledge and even a bit of experience over the usage of the Skill he was about to learn.
Fantasy · PancakesWitch
wow, this is actually some pretty good fan fic.
ch 19 19. The Dog and the Rat
Book&Literature · MisterImmortal
hope this turns out to be a good book, and doesn't go downhill
ch 0 1 1. Grandpa Universe
Book&Literature · MisterImmortal
nice work as always
ch 67 Kidnapped The Wrong Dragon Part Two
Fantasy · invayne
looking forward to Kana's evolution
ch 45 Onwards Towards The Border Part One
Fantasy · invayne
Honestly the story is great, and I enjoyed reading it. The characters are well designed, and have some backstory to them. The world while not unique is still interesting, since its not too repetitive. My only main issue with this is that the grammar is really bad, and can make it hard to read. Which is a real shame since otherwise this would have been a perfect novel.
Leveling Endlessly with the Strongest System!
Fantasy · Crimson_ink