Webnovel Author: Ethanwoods - Novel Collection

Ethanwoods

1yr

Commented

This sentence feels weird to me.

'hah....I really was a loser, wasn't I?...if I was smarter I could have not been in those situations'

Loser's redo: Transmigration in a novel

Fantasy · chaotic_1

Ethanwoods

1yr

Commented

I would say every move that I make

'And why are these twins looking every of my move?'

Transmigrated to Become Hero's Aid

Fantasy · Rudia_Estelle

Ethanwoods

1yr

Commented

I would say bump instead of bumped

His vision immediately got blacked out as he felt his head bumped into something hard. His body also ached over. There was something warm flowing over is forehead. May be it was blood? He felt so much pain after that. So much that he couldn't gather this thoughts clearly. All the things he could hear were just murmurs and shouts of the people from here and there as his vision got blurry.

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Fantasy · Rudia_Estelle

Ethanwoods

2yr

Posted

Author here, I know that this book is not going to be good but I just want to improve in something so here I am. Just to let you guys know I have a basic outline of what I am going to write for this book and I hope it won't be one of those books that the mc is just broken in luck and no thinking.