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My evil will not only survive in this world but also thrive here. No matter if it stays under the veil or comes out in the open."

Vile Evil Hides Under The Veil

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Me waiting for the next chapter

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You sure this ain't a filler? I mean, Chun Jack's a good character, but I still don't like Fillers. *Flashbacks to Naruto*

ch 51 Caravan life

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I am infinitely confused and intrigued.

ch 50 Plot armour engaged?

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What is Ideology?

ch 50 Plot armour engaged?

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Is Heaven's Will protecting Fang Yuan from MC? It sounds like his mind is being manipulated but he can notice it because he is an otherworldly demon. I wonder if he will replace Fang Yuan in the future and take sovereign Immortal fetus Gu.

ch 49 Wrong path?

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I thought you would wait a day for the comments and then post a chapter. Thanks for the content and keep up the good work. Just add some more 'detail' chapters and integrate some plot into them please. There aren't enough plot to go around.

ch 47 Half Dao Mark?

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I like your to the point style, but I would like some more chapters, where you explain his exploits, rather than just saying, that X happened and Y is the result. Don't stretch it for like 5 chapters, but this is your story, so do it however you want to.

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This isn't as dark as I wanted it to be!

ch 0 6 Chapter 6

Twilight: We Are Venom!

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Thanks for the chapter. It was

ch 46 Eli Ni, the human refinement cauldron

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Gimmy more!

ch 44 Traumatic interrogation

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Yooo. You uploading again. Welcome back, I thought you just dropped the whole thing.

ch 43 Double takedown

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Why did the guy kill them tho? Just get a divorce and move on. Why did he even get married in the first place? He makes no fking sense! I want answers, not death! Don't use him as a dumb plot point and then throw him away! Hop to it, make a believable explanation to this paradoxical existence!

ch 0 5 Chapter 5

Twilight: We Are Venom!

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Venom is a symbiot, so Peter being surprised at Venom becoming a monster after all he taught it were hate, betrayal and anger was the most annoying thing about Spiderman.

ch 0 2 Chapter 2