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I thoroughly enjoy this book. The world building is good and could use some development. the writing is iffy at times but not the worst I’ve seen. Story and character design are good and I’m a give five stars to them cause I like the book but their definitely needs some work there other than that this book has some potential.

I love this book unfortunately the characters are bland and they’re not really developed their is no character progession till chapter 600 ish and the world background isn’t properly fleshed out it sucks and I hope it gets better plz