Webnovel Author: Darkness_Sun - Fanfic Collection

I really liked what I've read so far, the only big problem being the lack of updates. Improve this, and the book's big problem will be solved.

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Muito boa a fic, eu só acho o MC um pouco OP demais, mas fora isso é uma ótima leitura. ........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................... .................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

nice

Apart from the fact that the author often makes grammatical errors that make reading a little more difficult, this fanfic is wonderful, I will enthusiastically follow your progress.

The fan-fic is very good, and has a good growth of the protagonist, but it fails a little with several holes in the story and neglected the other characters of the work. Personally I was a little disappointed with the ending and the super OP powers that the MC ends up having. But it is a great work to read if you have nothing to do.