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that was hilarious love it

finally cultivation....

that was grest

great ch.... 😜 they both learned quick about the other...

yes let it get hot an jucy ... golden ticket yes ur worthy hope 4 mote ch. soon...

I understand wanting to get us involved but giving too many hints makes it too easy to understand your plot please leave a little mystery author

that's what I'm talking about author much better chapter very happy to see things progressing but all in all I really like the book matter of fact I just paid for the rest of the chapters

so the story is going pretty good but I'm missing the demon part of Odin what's going on with that can you throw in a little more of that or every now and again he is an exorbitantly more powers like he's kind of stagnant walking through like a fool when before he used to be so smart help me author help me

bla bla bla... i liked the fight just the way ut was good job author...

i was cracking up ...lol...

no way from the hints I can see that you've got a nice little setup coming in this future Arc and the power play struggle this going to be they're for us to be in your future too I can see hints for so I get why you wrote the chapter

THAT WAS AMAZING AUTHOR!!! What a Battelle ... What a way to segway into the next ark... GREAT WORK!!!

absolutely loved the last couple chapters this battle has been phenomenal go author keep it up can't wait to read more murder death and Mayhem!!!

yes I do I never like that evil witch ever since the very beginning when she was going against Anastasia I knew there was going to be some kind of bs that she would pull...good job author...

so the story is really good but this hypothetical conversation between you and the boss is kind of odd

im so happy to hear that !!! i want gore and battels and cool flips and stuff...😉

I'm thinking the comment about him having guardianship would be the trump card now I got to read to find out if I'm right

a few chapters back u asked what was peps fav quote... its the last lines of this chapter they're both Devil's pretending to be Angels seems like a perfect quote to me ...