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Alex_Torkamani_8311

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Not that bad, somewhat realistic interactions, which makes it good. You also do a good job of describing the environment, but the thing that I like the most is the fact that he has restrictions on using the system. One criticism is the fact that the relationship between the manager and the MC didn't feel that natural and too pushed. But generally not that boring, 7/10.

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"Rub one" lol, first time ever reading something like this in a novel. Nice job author

"Thanks," said Rina as she got out of the car and entered her mansion. She went straight to her bedroom to rest, calm down and maybe even rub one, as the overwhelming thoughts and emotions she was experiencing could cause her brain to shut down from excitement and happiness if not properly vented.

Getting a Technology System in Modern Day

Getting a Technology System in Modern Day

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Xi Jingping is watching, be carefull lol.

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