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I vote for Chakra Spider

I vote for Chakra Spider I have something I'd like to ask I would have voted for life as a shaman but that chapter is still not renewed yet lets talk about it later

other people may have done the same but your probably the first who's done the most and with dozens of chapters already thatts still a high feat don't you forget so what will you do with this feedback now?

oh if naruto has a kid I hope it can be a shaman Originality 5(would have been a six if other authors hadn't tried this with oc kids so but you kept the canon kids so its a good 5, you added high characters like the gods of various mythologies but not much about the creatures or subjects from their world you mentioned amatarasu but never about the youkai or the magical properties like curses shes dealt with)(I hear nobunaga era is close to inuyasha era but you claim such characters are weak, boruto was weak but you made him strong and I'm glad so basically you can make any weakling strong) setting 3(it's always at konoha, sure there are missions but the elemental nations has lost it's luster, yes you've added other dimensions but thoses rarely appear once only for another dimension to appear and forget the previous one, seeing more previous worlds like great reds land could help) characterization 6 (I commend you for giving the kids unique abilities even though the sudden change could turn the course of the story but dont make them too strong so quickly as that fred guy or someone like him should be dealt with strategy next time, maybe you could do funny references, fun fact Boruto has the same voice as sailor Jupiter Himawari has the voice as Neptune from neptunia plus fate Tiamat and medusa lancer and gorgon kawaki has the voice of fate karna) conflict and plot( 4 the plot feels like world building and the conflicts have gotten short but I admit you did emotional conflicts which helps as not all problems can be solved with truth seeker balls, I see you've added some arcs but some look very different from the others and it's very possible naruto could one hit these arcs easily so hopefully the kids could try theses arcs emotional payoff 7(your emotional moments may be short moments as they dont last long but you take time to give one chapter at a time to see their growth) theme my highest score 8 (It's rare seeing stories about naruto being a dad because most authors usually quit like your uzumaki idea, I liked it but you didn't) that's my review I hope this helps

You know since Hachimaru was made by kishimoto I guess that could Basically make him Naruto's brother but aww the kawaki arc is so far away

but I'm guessing only the otsutsuki god has it right? so have you decided which seven deadly sins characters with hax would appear?

wouldn't it be interesting if there was a skill that shut down other skills like turning off the power button?

so which ones in seven deadly sins will have hax power to be otsutsuki? fun fact theres a Lancelot and Tristan in that world but also one in fate two, or will you ignore that?

hmm...well the only people that haven't lost fights in that show was merlin everyone else lost fights or died?

well I've seen enough demons for a life time but I've always been curious about the arch angels like lucidiel mael and the other two plus the original Elizabeth unfortunately they lost their physical bodies but some posses certain bodies do you think The goddess race is a useful group for underlings of the otsutsuki or something else?

okay fine I really wanted boruto and siblings to meet the half demon princesses towa moroha and setsuna but that seems difficult for your reasoning also as a question are you planning heavy hitters from the seven deadly sins anime or are you do you have enough material

the power is different compared to the user who loses some fights the power of destruction is no different if it was used by someone incompetent so what's wrong with weak characters you can just make them strong right?

hmm so how are your other stories

and anyway rias isn't that strong either for example sigh darn really hoping for youkai stuff

dude thats what I said about rachnera?

so much anime I'm actually hoping for inuyasha stuff next and maybe some mushibugyo as well

so much anime I'm actually hoping for inuyasha stuff next and maybe some mushibugyo if possible