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naffan

naffan

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Amateur writer. Expert reader.

2020-11-25 Joined United States

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That's fare

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Probably not the best thing to do when your trying to forget… I suppose it’s better than alcohol 😭My moneys on someone coming to sit on the bench with her in the next chapter. Perhaps a man 😳

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Will Fate Bring Us Together?

Will Fate Bring Us Together?

Urban · Rayne_Rue

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Definitely forever alone

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Will Fate Bring Us Together?

Will Fate Bring Us Together?

Urban · Rayne_Rue

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5 years 😬 little attached

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Will Fate Bring Us Together?

Will Fate Bring Us Together?

Urban · Rayne_Rue

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I wouldn’t either

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The Mafia Couple

The Mafia Couple

Urban · Rayne_Rue

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You could if he didn’t wake you up lol

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The Mafia Couple

The Mafia Couple

Urban · Rayne_Rue

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Guess I got my answer

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The Mafia Couple

The Mafia Couple

Urban · Rayne_Rue

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Good dad

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The Mafia Couple

The Mafia Couple

Urban · Rayne_Rue

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Stalker 😳

" Because I did a background check on you," he says.

The Mafia Couple

The Mafia Couple

Urban · Rayne_Rue

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Coed dormroom in college?

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The Mafia Couple

The Mafia Couple

Urban · Rayne_Rue

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Mystery roommate

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The Mafia Couple

The Mafia Couple

Urban · Rayne_Rue

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There are no accidents 🙄

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The Mafia Couple

The Mafia Couple

Urban · Rayne_Rue

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Great novel. Firstly, it is a pleasure to read. With my eyes, I spotted zero grammar mistakes and the paragraph flowed perfectly. Secondly, the characters give off a very real feel. While the situation are extram, everyone has a cause for how they react. I was very glad how the family gets questioned multiple times for their rash actions that occurred in the first chapter. Despite having their own, reasonably unreasonable, justifications. It adds layers and is personally what I think makes everything work so well. Lastly, this is not my normal genre I like to read. So, when I say this novel pulls you in and gets you interested, it really attests to the authors great writing. Anyone reading this review should not hesitate to give this story a chance.

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