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The Story Is continuously interesting. author is very creative!

The author writes very articulate mature scenes. I would consider this their gift/specialty. As for the rest of the plot or character development, dont hold high Expectations.

The first few chapters are very captivating. i stumbled on this book by accident but found my self having trouble putting it down. Im around chapter 14 and the Draw has diminished with some minor fan service but im still curious to see what happens next. The writing is decent, Not great. it can be verbose and uses slang Phrases which dont seem extremely necessary. im a stickler for prose so it might not bother most people.