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ch 31 Must Read
Book&Literature · Demonun
1) I don't know why you're guessing... I literally stated why I felt as I do. But allow me to clarify. I understand that mentally he's older (Though not by a large margin.). Physically, however, he's not much older than the golden trio. So why call others who around the same age "kid"? He's even done it to people his own (Physical.) age. As I said, I find it odd that he keeps doing so. Cringeworthy even. It's as simple as that. 2) Logically speaking... and as more an afterthought than anything else, if I "never passed by that childish phase where you act as if anyone younger than you is a kid in your opinion", then would I not agree with you?
"No problem kid. Plus, these are my modified version. They're already reducing your recovery time by four months." I say with a smile as I ruffle his hair.
Book&Literature · Alexander_the_grey
Their BOTH kids. That's my point.
"No problem kid. Plus, these are my modified version. They're already reducing your recovery time by four months." I say with a smile as I ruffle his hair.
Book&Literature · Alexander_the_grey
Us? Kyle, yeah. Steve, no.
"Don't worry, after this competition, no one here will look down on us anymore." Kyle remained calm, not showing any trace of nervousness on his face.
Movies · DarkShadow95
I love a good side story. Thx for the chapter, my dude.
ch 25 Cleanup: 546’s POV
TV · MM_Inferyes
That's some quick acceptance, right there.
From now on, there would be no more Lu Ming; there was only the brand-new Kyle.
Movies · DarkShadow95
He's right.
"Now, I know I have been gone for a year, and you all must be wondering where I have been. Well, this new book will tell you all that and more. In it, I record my trip to a land that is so cold that there is hardly any life there, and the danger is so imminent that the life that does inhabit this land is always in jeopardy. Finally, I encounter a mythical, never before seen magical beast that I doubt will ever be seen again, so come forward and buy my new book. Assault On The Abominable Snowman!" Another wave of cheer rings out, and I can't help the smile that grows on my face.
Movies · DragonField
This should be phrased differently. I would go with something along the lines of, "Start experimenting and using Legilimency on Digby, aiming to infiltrate his mind and reveal his innermost thoughts to me.". When you use the words "pry his head open", it might be taken the wrong way.
18:00 - Start experimenting and using Legilimency on Digby, aiming to pry his head open and reveal his mind to me.
Movies · DragonField
shift=sift
"So, come on now, what is my very best feature? Look closely now, take your time and think about it because there is a veritable treasure trove to shift through to get to the most valuable piece of treasure, and that is what I am, a national treasure. I, Gilderoy Lockhart, am the very best and most handsome wizard in all of Britain, nay, in all of Europe, nay, in all of the wor-" I slam the desk drawer I was looking through closed, having gotten very angry with my lack of results and this dumbass portrait has brought me to boiling temperature. So I turn around to see its stupid smug self-assured grin as it looks down at me, and I feel the intense urge to just launch my hands at the blasted thing and just tear it to shreds.
Movies · DragonField
storey=story
He then went mysteriously "missing" for three weeks before revealing to the Daily Prophet that he had been kidnapped by trolls in the wilds of Stockton-on-Tees, with this being one of the milder stunts he had pulled. His popularity soared once more as a result of the storey. As a result of this experience, he asserted that one should "be sparing with [one's] public appearances, at first," lest one become overexposed.
Movies · DragonField
Also, the last sentence in this paragraph was a run-on sentence. Break it down if you want it to read as intended.
It was only upon reading the Hogwarts letter that my mind got a jolt. I realised that I am not, in fact, this fake disgrace of a human being who only felt a little saddened at the prospect of his mother's death, which pissed me off never having had a family of my own, and so I retook control. This body is definitely mine now, and the soul or whatever of Gilderoy Lockhart no longer seems to be around. However, his memories are still inside this body as shone by the fact that I know things that only he would know and getting overwhelmed by them, I was nearly consumed and devoured by vanity and narcissism.
Movies · DragonField
shone=shown
It was only upon reading the Hogwarts letter that my mind got a jolt. I realised that I am not, in fact, this fake disgrace of a human being who only felt a little saddened at the prospect of his mother's death, which pissed me off never having had a family of my own, and so I retook control. This body is definitely mine now, and the soul or whatever of Gilderoy Lockhart no longer seems to be around. However, his memories are still inside this body as shone by the fact that I know things that only he would know and getting overwhelmed by them, I was nearly consumed and devoured by vanity and narcissism.
Movies · DragonField
😂😂😂
Wait, what? What the hell is this woman on about- OH MY GOD, SHE'S SUCKING MY DICK, OH MY GOD, OH MY GOD, OH MY GOD, WHO GIVES A FUCK WHAT SHE WAS ON ABOUT? THIS IS LITERALLY A DREAM COME TRUE.
Movies · DragonField
Wholeheartedly disagree. Way less drama this term.
She kept pushing me into one corner after the other that I even considered dropping a few hints I knew about her husband's alter ego to get her to back off but ultimately decided against it.
Anime & Comics · Wicked132
Alteration is the one school of magic that could allow a mortal to rival the Divines. I'm looking forward to seeing where this author takes the concept.
You are the Skilled of Alteration. While you may not start as the most powerful, you have unheard of growth potential and power in magical realm of Alteration. Whether you are a natural prodigy, blessed by the Aedra, cursed by the Daedra, or gained the attention of The Dreamer, it matters not. What matters is what you make of it.
Video Games · Pepey_LePew
There's a difference between commenting on something and complaining about it. Especially if you do it continually. The people I was referring were the ones who LITERALLY kept commenting LONG after they said they'd drop. Complaining the WHOLE time. It got annoying after awhile.
But both of them stopped yelling at each when they saw the tears coming out of my eyes. It wasn't out of sadness, I was just so glad and relieved that these two were my friends that I couldn't stop the tears.
Harry Potter and the Rise of the Protector
Book&Literature · Alexander_the_grey