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do you think you are going to keep writing the story i though it was super good so far

what is the name of the original

are you going to update any time soon or did you drop

its a very good book i hope you keep writing and don't drop the book I'm at school so I can write to much so I'm just going to type random things ljjgcjgcjgcjghgchkcfcljhgcmjgcjgjvcfx

I liked this book at the start and I know you have to have some conflict to make a story interesting but I think it is stupid that after the first attack on the tower Tony did semenly nothing to stop it from happening again and after the second attack Loki didn't put up some magic to stop another attack or move her to asgard or literally any other place in the universe to keep her safe I feel like a super genius and a God could do a lot better protecting her then doing nothing and she has super strong magic loki literally just show her magic to defend her self I don't expect her to just suddenly be able to do it but it was like multiple months where she trained every day and by the third attack she could do nothing not run or fight I just think you have to over look a lot a plot holes to enjoy this book and I can't do it