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Suddenly, everything slows down, then Kian pulls out two pistols and begins firing rapidly. His hands move so fast that they blur, and the sound of his guns is like that of a machine gun. Every bullet flies true, hitting the target.

Marvel: Infinity

Marvel: Infinity

Anime & Comics · Abyssuit

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195,58 cm

Hector didn't sit at his table, instead, he greeted them on the couches while having some milk tea. Hector was the tallest president in history, standing 6'5" tall, while his muscular frame was enough to make any man feel small and insecure, even more so when they were shaking his strong hands. "Well, due to some circumstances, I'm the president, let's work together and make sure nobody takes advantage of our peaceful intentions.

Marvel: Mr. President [COMPLETE]

Marvel: Mr. President [COMPLETE]

Movies · MisterImmortal

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Maybe he thought. didn't he say? He's not sick talking to himself, is he? (google tranalete)

"I wonder why she is so quick to do what I ask of her for nothing in return, with all the knowledge she has collected over the years I should try to learn something from her, I'll ask her the next time she visits." Says Cul as he goes back to meditating.

New God in marvel

New God in marvel

Movies · DarknessAuthor

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The words in this paragraph are repeated.

I actually only discovered my next ability when I was out with Mary Jane, her annoying me actually turned out to be useful. We had just finished watching a movie and we were coming out of the cinema (not theatre as I was originally an Englishman), some dude came up and started hitting on MJ and i wasn't really bothered about it as she's only a friend to me. She rejected him but the guy started to get pushy and I eventually had to step in and tell the guy to sling his hook, he did but not before he said some terribly rude things to Mary Jane. When he turned around and stared to walk away I got incredibly angry and clenched my fists hard as I was about to kick this guys ass. The only thing that stopped me was MJ's gasp and when I followed her line of sight I knew why. Extending out of my fists were three claws with the same positioning as wolverines(between the index finger, the middle finger, the ring finger and the little finger) but that was about the only similarity. The claws were made of black bone, straight and they curved at the end kinda like a tigers. The two outer ones extended about twenty centimetres with the middle one being about a third of that. They were a dull black and looked quite intimidating, when I saw them I was shocked and unclenches my hand which made them disappear. Unfortunately the asshat had already left by then.

Swallowing The Spider (Linear)

Swallowing The Spider (Linear)

Anime & Comics · DragonField

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Иммунитет не улучшился из-за суперсил ?(Google transeted)

Leo had already jumped into a photo of the North Pole as a test. The Aurora was very beautiful and the polar bears are really cute, but it's too damn cold. After returning home and catching a cold for several days, Leo swore to himself that he will never go to the North Pole again.

Starting as a Jumper on Marvel Multiverse

Starting as a Jumper on Marvel Multiverse

Movies · AurelionSoul

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The paragraphs are repeated. Fix it.

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The paragraphs are repeated. Fix it.

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The paragraphs are repeated.

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I hope that the main character does not become Darkseid's mind and loses his humanity. (Google translete)

Listening to Christians heartbeat, Ward was surprised that he wasn't lying. He really did want ward to go along. Well, with his new abilities, he didn't really 'need to eat', but if this was an olive branch… then he might as well take it. Seeing his other siblings walk up, both lost in their own thoughts, he smiled.

MCU: Darkseid(Dropped)

MCU: Darkseid(Dropped)

Movies · Endless_Crow

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Why didn't the system warn him?

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DcMcu: kaiju system

DcMcu: kaiju system

Sci-fi · wiz161

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Why are the sentences repeated?Ctrl+C Ctrl+V ???

Juno: ''Shit, that means I have to see the watcher's bald ass head again. ''Thanks for the ship i'll be sure to come back to Earth and visit you again''. I a fraction of the energy I had been gathering over the centuries and blasted throught the Earth's crust and then mantle. I had to check if the celestials were still conducting their tests, but was happy to see that they were finally gone. I flew upwards and when I looked down, I could see that some of the continents I had recognised in my previous life had started to form. I made it out the atmosphere and was travelling to the moon. When I landed I could see the damn watcher still in the same position that we was when he blasted me off the moon. He seemed to look at me for a moment. Hehehe he realised my awesome power. I travelled further and further until I reached the ships location. I blasted away the rubble and had caused a mini moon quake. I lifted the ship up from the ground and shrunk my self down and entered. It had weird pads that I felt like should put my hands on. When I did that I felt as if my consciousness had merged with the ship. This should be like driving a car right? Since it was now connected to my mind I thought about the place were I wanted to go. Asgard. The ship mapped out the directions on the screen for me to follow. next stop. The land of the gods.

Reborn as a celestial in marvel

Reborn as a celestial in marvel

Anime & Comics · Jkxngxz

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(Mc looks like 'Ban' from 'Seven deadly sins')

Legend of Marvel

Legend of Marvel

Fantasy · Yash_Mishra_0345

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Wtf?why are whole paragraphs repeated ?

Well after I see around myself I a house that is not in a good condition to say atleast I know that I was born in not well off family, not that I want to be born in well off family especially in this time period otherwise your brother maybe trying to kill you(Nobel family internal conflict thing). After all I was born in 1000 CE. After sometime a man with haggard face came in the room with an old lady who I think is the lady who helped my mother with labor. She smiles looking at me and says "he is a good and healthy boy, the mother is also safe and is out of danger".My father came to bed and kissed my mother and they both looked at me affectionately. My mother says to my father"you should name him I suggest we should call him 'Aadi',as I have read in an old text in my family that means beginning and it's our beginning of a complete family ".My father was a bit tensed at my mother mentioning her family and I could see it but he also liked the name so he said ok, and then he was happy and goes out to talk to the neighbors and preparing for a meal to welcome my arrival. After he goes out my mother watches me as I have closed my eyes and trying to feel my power that I have asked for God but I can't feel anything, nothing at all. After sometime I heard voice to God laughing at me and he says "I am sorry to tell you that all your powers will be only available to you when you turn 10 years old, so enjoy as a normal human at the lowest lowest level of society. Oh. ....!!..and I have a surprise for you. Wish you a happy survival. Hahahaha.....!!.."

Legend of Marvel

Legend of Marvel

Fantasy · Yash_Mishra_0345

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cliche .I've seen this in other fanfiction before.

"Then is it alright if I give you a name? I know the creation shouldn't name the creator, but I feel it unfair that everyone else in the world has a name but the most important one."

Cupid Styll: Adventures in One Punch Man

Cupid Styll: Adventures in One Punch Man

Action · Lord_of_Shadows

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repeated sentences

He then looks over to the destroyed half and looks out. We both walk over to the edge and see the monster. He was huge, naked, and super buff. He was full of lean muscles all over his body. I could see this small spot on his right shoulder that I assume is his mad scientist brother. All of a sudden Saitama disappears and a new dot appears on his shoulder. I decide I should at least try to help, so I start to manifest my wings. I felt a slight burning sensation and a pair of silver and blue seven foot wings appear on my back. They have a very intricate design on it that constantly shifts and changes, but overall I'd describe it as swirls. After they appear, I can feel them like they where always there. I start to float off the ground without my wings flapping. I start to fly in the direction of the monster, but I realize that he's really far away. I mean, he travels miles in one step. I see him slap his right shoulder and start screaming. Then I see him grab what I assume is Saitama and slam him to the ground, destroying a big building. Then he starts rapidly punching, destroying the surrounding buildings and creating a gigantic pit in the ground. All of a sudden his head jerks backward and I defiantly hear his neck breaking. He slowly falls backwards and is about to crush a ton of buildings. I don't know if there are people behind him, but I still decide I should try to stop him falling. I start thinking about my barrier ability and I suddenly start to feel an odd sensation all over my body. I try to control the sensation and I can sort of feel my surroundings. I try thinking of a barrier appearing below the giant and almost instantly what looks like a block of hard, silver colored glass appears below it. He falls on it and it doesn't even move, let alone break. I guess when it says almost unbreakable in the description of the ability, it means almost unbreakable. As I get closer I see Saitama falling so also create a barrier under him, and it appears and stops him.

Cupid Styll: Adventures in One Punch Man

Cupid Styll: Adventures in One Punch Man

Action · Lord_of_Shadows

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