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will add though if you wanna just read an ecchi novel, this is pretty good as that.

I think this is one of the few books I genuinely believe belongs in the top rated books. Every character feels real. I think this gets overlooked so often, but I believe characters make the events within their world important. Without a character to care for, the events within the world have no emotional impact for the reader because there is no emotional investment. In this novel, every character has their own motivations and struggles with being good. They have stories that are worth listening to. When someone dies or leaves, theres a hole that cant exactly be filled. I think thats the mark of a great character. You miss them. When it comes to story development, everything feels worth reading because everything holds importance. I cant skip a story arc and see quinn and his friends doing the same thing but in a different story arc. No no. Quinn is different and so are his friends. Its like every paragraph has purpose, and if you ask me its part of what makes reading this such a joy. Props to author, I highly recommend this.

The story leans into emotion quite a bit. which I appreciate. The author is making a clear effort to develop the characters and their personalities. I think emotional moments tend to come off half baked and a tad empty along with the characters. The moments just dont feel earned. With that said, this author is clearly putting in the effort and honestly isnt failing, which is a far cry from what plenty of popular authors do anyways.

After reading the top books on webnovel Ive come back and concluded that yeah romerus books are just more interesting to me. The characters are always developed and you see their thoughts and feelings and can sometimes relate. I find myself feeling sad when a character dies and feeling great when something good happens. I think thats the hallmark of good character creation to me. My only real drawbacks with romeru in general is some real weird story progression that can happen. Not everything gets fully fleshed out. But tbh, most novels dont anyways.

Im not sure why this gets such a high rating. Its perfectly fine to read, dont get me wrong, but I think a 5 is overboard. At least for the first 100 chapters. progression system is nice. fast paced but not lightning. powers are cool and while not entirely unique, are like a 4/5 which is great. Plenty of fighting and mc is very strong. Side characters are replaceable and have no function other than slightly useful damaging units. overarching plot to save the family is out of sight, out of mind. Conflict pops up but often have no emotional impact towards the main character. Definitely not bad overall though

Very very solid stuff. The story is near incoherent in the beginning I was about to drop it tbh. Thats why Im so genuinely impressed by how fast this novel improves. Give it like 15-20 chapters and the story turns from a 2 to 4.5. Easy recommendation. If youre familiar with my hero academia it kiiinda reminds me of that. As in, the abilities are creative (oddly specific at times) and give the characters space to outwit their opponents. The characters have to earn their wins instead out stat checking them.