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Not that I'm doubting whether or not you will come back, but could you please put up the old chapters untill you start reuploading? I enjoyed rereading the old chapters.

honestly the charm of the story was that it took place in real life. so many stories insert you into that world and don't even really use it. Also since he doesn't have a system I think it makes more sense for him to focus just on acting. maybe writing since he has access to books from the future. I would agree with you that tycoon actor could be a good source of inspiration

The story's writing quality is pretty good, with a solid premise. The only problem is that the fact that the plot line doesn't really have any tension and it causes the story to be very boring and a little difficult to read.

The story is is great for now, with very stable updating that I really appreciate by the author. The story is perfectly readable with no grammatical errors and show great potential.

I don't quite know where you are at, but after Dawn goes to college and they begin to proper date, everything appears to be going well with no problems, other than the fact that Dawn has a DP/TP kink, to all of a sudden a reveal that she wasn't rhe character the entire story made her out to be. How she isn't perfect blah blah blah, before she cheats on Ben and leaves him 100% out of the blue, completely going against her entire character that's had been building up the entire story. I haven't really read after that point so I don't know if the author is going to rry and fix it.

Yep I agree with you 100% the story is a huge disappointment.

This story is showing some good potential. It's still to early to tell if the story will be good, but the current pacing and system is pretty nice. Some of the character can be bland though and there are grammatical errors that slightly detract from the experience.

The story is pretty good, the pacing is a little fast and the characters can be a little bland. But overall not a bad read. I'm not a huge fan of how the author does dialogue, but I've seen far worse and it definitely isn't unbearable.

The story is absolutely fantastic and one of my favorites to read on this website. I was initially worried about the stories pacing and how the system will work, and I think the author handled it brilliantly. I think the love line was a little rushed and her character isn't super fleshed out yet, but I am hoping that changes.

Incredible pacing and writing. The characters are great with a well balanced system. The character is obviously op but there is an appropriate amount of build up.

Zero redemption for Dawn's character. What is the point of building g up her character only to just fucking randomly ruin it. You spend so much time on them only to complete fuck it up.

I hated how Dawn's story ended, it cause me to feel physically ill and frustrated. The lack of catharsis from that storyline ruined my entire experience with this story.