seashanty_enjoyer - Profile

Fine I'm going to review it. in short: I enjoyed reading the book and the stories about the three MC's the book has to offer rn. I recommend it to every reader who enjoys magic stuff. writing quality: the grammar is above average compared to studd you can find here but also not comparable to the top 25 author's but that should be expected. update stability: I should also note that even though the author updates once a day, his updates seem to be on random times. (probably bc he has no chapters ready.) world building: when it comes to world building we got to see three different places. The city, the border town with crimes and the dungeon. from all three places I enjoyed the dungeon the most. also how he tries to establish a magic system rooted in biology also seems to be interesting. hopefully he elaborates more in that. story development is a bit complicated since the book has 5 MC's but we see the adventures of 3 of them. the parsytic space mage, the necromancer whose Skeleton seems to be stronger than himself and the blood devourer MC who tries to survive in a dungeon while getting hunted by Mutants. I really like how the author foreshadows something like 20 chapters ago and the consequences happen sooner or later. the biggest problem rn is that since all 3 of them live in different places, it would have been better to write 3 books about the adventure of each of the siblings instead combining them into one book where they share no equal spotlight. but I can also understand the author. it's hard to write 5 books at once and trying to get every reader to read all five of them is nearly impossible. the good thing is that the author also seems to realize it and will hopefully work on that front sooner or later.

did u seriously just give yourself a one-star rating?